Son of Jiraiya and Zabuza's Waifu Adventure

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JManM

First thing that has to be covered is that this is a fic adapting the Manga. As such, movies and anime only filler may be adapted at my discretion, and as such all the filler nonsense that breaks the balance of the setting such as Ranmaru and his eyes, or the Chakra Armor in Ninja Clash in the Land of Snow are not in this story. Despite this I place no weight with verbal descriptions of characters made in the manga that are not immediately supported by what we see. Kishi wrote Naruto on a very tight schedule and most of his dialogue is hype work that has zero thought put into it. This story also bashes fanon tropes, there is no civilian council, no Clan Restoration Act, Minato didn't chose Naruto because he wouldn't place the burden on anyone else but because he believed Naruto could handle the Kyubi (Unlike non-Uzumaki characters who would very likely die), adults can become Jinchuriki, Hiruzen's squad aren't running around doing evil - the worst thing they did in canon outside of Danzo was suggest that Naruto not be allowed to leave the village so Akatsuki couldn't capture him in the wild and Danzo was a cellar dweller retcon character who only appeared in part two to push Sai as a member of Team Kakashi and then later laments having to leave his comfortable underground bunker to become Hokage, Naruto wasn't getting beatings on the streets growing up from adults, they don't attack his house every October 10, etcetera etcetera and so on and so forth. So check your fanon baggage at the door. I do make my best attempt to explain the many many many plot holes in Naruto, and it is a lot of work that gets done in the first few chapters. Most importantly this story is first person subjective, enabling me to write from the PoV of an unreliable narrator. You will encounter this the most in flashbacks that deal with Slice of Life content, where Kiba narrates a story to be more cool or funny and by the end of it has to quickly explain what really happened by adding in details and observations he previously left out. This allows slice of life content to not get boring, but also brings the tone back down so that the story can continue at its normal level. I am aware that this technique shoots right over people's heads and I do it any way so that certain sections of the story don't get boring. You have been warned.

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The_ReadingOne

There is no need for me to read it to give this book full marks because the writer is very talented in book making and if you have read any of his other works then you know what I'm talking about this guy is a genius go read some of his other books you won't be disappointed

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Kami12

This quite literally the greatest story I have read so far on this app/site. As the Kami I order you to read it. I also hope the author keeps up the good work.👍👍👍👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😤😤😤

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Kaito_Uzumaki

and my man strikes once again. I had a suspicion once your Invincible fic started slowing down. I knew you too well that it mean my man is either having a vacation with his family or there's a new face in town

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ravhage

I LOVE THIS. let it be said that your humor is the greatest expression of idontgiveash*tery found on this website and I LOVE IT!

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nwonknuresu

Bro 5/5 all the way this had me laughing so hard i was crying just hope to see more, this is what i read fanfics for keep up the good work.

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HadesOnDrugs

An oversmart dog barking at me(no offence)that's what this whole fics writing felt like. I don't understand the phrase u use, feels a bit too complicated and hard to understand may that's because of my ignorance but still I think u should use simple language and not to complicate things. The story is good though.

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THOTSLAYER

Did you delete your discord? And are you going to still update your fics?mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmMMmMmmmmMMmMmMmMM mmMMmMMmM

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RavenClock

Great story overall Would have love to let it stock pile but can't resist I suggest this story for everyone 140 characters is a lot. .........

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ManasCiel

Definitely worth a try! 5/5 for all. It is a more realistic take on the Naruto world. Keep up the good work Author!

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Faranade

Great story, man hasn't written a poor story so far. Even his first story, the Jaune SI one, was pretty good if a little short. (I dont know if that's actually his first story)

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laboonlaboon

great story, thanks author ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] please keep writing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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moh999

this Is some Realy Good Stuff, Totally Recommend it, this SI is like A Fresh air to the typical Naruto SI Fics, it Got the Comedy and The Jokes to Deadpool's level, I love. Keep up

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Youknowme

I loved it Jdjejhfyrdkn jtfyífihgffiyfkhtfhtfyitfighidhfkygfryufgfhkfgfjhtfhgifiytfihtfiutfjitfijtfkjgf hgfkhtfhgfhkgfkhgdkhgdkhfdhgdhkfhgfkjtfkjgffjgfiytfkhtbgfkhtfhitfhitfhitfhirdjhrdyurfuo5dkhrvjtifhfudbgchkgdjgrutekdkjhgjkgjy

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RiceCake_Playz

changed the story mid story, a real disappointment.

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Shaggy_Boombastic

I actually enjoyed son of jiraya then he went and fűčƙěɗ it all up. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🖕

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Humbuub

not my cup of tea. The amount of crass words combined would be enough for an entire chapter. This kind of writing just don't fit Narutoverse.

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Siwdhter_Hs

such a shame this is no longer updated, probably one of my most like works on webnovel EVER and i have been daily reading for 2 years, would buy this book if it was ever finished/continued

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Golias

I don't understand half of what you want to express, maybe it's too confusing or maybe you just spit out word after word that pops into your head hoping everyone understands, maybe you don't even care if anyone understands or not, it's fun at first, but it gets tiring quickly.