There could be a fanfiction named 'A Moment of Vulnerability'. In this, Lily finds Snape crying in the Potions classroom after a particularly harsh encounter with James Potter. It shows how Snape's pride is broken and Lily's reaction to seeing his vulnerability.
One popular fanfiction could be 'The Unseen Bond' where Snape stumbles upon fem Harry crying in the Forbidden Forest. In this story, it delves into the complex relationship between them as Snape is initially shocked but then shows a side of unexpected kindness.
There's this fanfiction called 'Lily's Discovery'. It's quite interesting as it not only focuses on the moment Lily finds Snape crying but also on what led up to that moment. It gives a backstory about Snape's recent struggles in the Slytherin house and how Lily's discovery might be a turning point in their friendship. It's a must - read for fans of their relationship.
There are many great "Harry Potter" fanfictions out there that stay true to the spirit of the original series. You can search for ones that deal with Snape and Hermione's relationship in a platonic or mentor - mentee way, which are much more in line with the overall tone of the books.
One popular Snape and Lily fanfiction is 'The Lily and the Prince'. It delves deep into their relationship, exploring their early years at Hogwarts. The story beautifully portrays Snape's complex feelings for Lily.
Perhaps she's being bullied. In the wizarding world, there could be other students who pick on her because she's a 'Mudblood'. This could be really distressing for Hermione, and when Snape finds her crying, he might be conflicted between his general dislike for Gryffindors and his sense of justice.
One popular 'Snape finds Hermione' fanfiction is 'A Prince's Tale'. It delves into an alternate scenario where Snape discovers Hermione's hidden talents in a more personal way. The story has great character development and a well - crafted plot that keeps readers engaged.
There's also 'The Confrontation' in which the story might build up tension between Lily and Snape over time. Maybe Snape says something really offensive, and Lily, being the strong - willed character she is, punches him as a form of standing up for herself and her values.
I would recommend 'When Lily Chooses Snape'. This fanfiction is quite well - written, with a great balance of dialogue and description. It makes you really believe in the possibility of Lily choosing Snape. Another one is 'Lily's Decision for Snape' which goes into the backstories of both characters and how that influences Lily's choice. Also, 'Snape and Lily: The Chosen Path' is a great piece that not only focuses on their relationship but also on how it affects the fates of other characters in the Harry Potter universe.
Another good one is 'Crying in Silence'. Draco is crying alone in the Astronomy Tower when Harry finds him. This fic focuses on the unspoken emotions between them and how this encounter might be the start of something new, like a new understanding or even a friendship.
One interesting 'Harry Potter Snape Lily' fanfiction is 'The Lily and the Prince'. It delves deep into Snape's unrequited love for Lily. Another one could be 'Lily's Influence on Snape', which shows how Lily's presence shaped Snape's character throughout his life. There's also 'Snape's Memories of Lily', which focuses on Snape's most precious memories of her.