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The writing quality of the author is decent, despite some common grammar mistakes which do not entirely affect the story that much so five stars. As for the plot, it seems to me that it is interesting even with a total of nine chapters so far. The concept is genuine, and perhaps it could give me ideas but rest assured that I won't copy yours or that will be called plagiarism. Anyways, the Stability of update is a five stars for me, since I assume that the author frequently updates. And, since I love this novel, I really recommend this novel to all readers who love the magic genre. As for the author, perhaps proofreading will help you with your grammar or you can use an app called Grammarly. Anyways! Good luck author, and keep up the good work!!!
A transmigration novel with a good plot. The story pace is smooth and the grammar is descent enough to not ruin the plot. The story sure has potential. Keep it up author!!
The title itself is captivating and its synopsis is well written also that hooks the readers more to further read the story. I like it! well, I am fond of novels with great writing quality and this novel is one of the many novels I have read with such good prose. The grammar, I have nothing to say, it's perfectly fine for me. Love the world background and the Characters. The characters seem to be lively and not of those "stiff" ones, it makes the story more fascinating because of the great character design. I am quite liking the story development so far... Well with this given review, I shall say that the author really did a great...no, I should say stunning job which made his/her book pleasant to read. Not to mention I REALLY LOVE THIS WIZARD THINGS because I am fond of fantasy, sci-fi, or anything magical that made me easily understand and paint your novel, Author, I like and Love this MASTERPIECE!
I adore Aren so much because he's eternally curious and hardworking. He has no evident malicious intents and that makes him an endearing character. As for my favourite character, it's definitely Tina. For the reason that she helped Aren unconditionally and did not take advantage of him. She hasn't appeared in the latest chapters, so please show her moreeeee. :'( You should've made that William suffer more! However, I'm content that he perished. That's what you get for using Aren! In Aren's previous life, he was a scientist, right? I was hoping that he'll apply some of his knowledge in this current world, even though it's run by magic. It's as if his past life was stated in passing. I suggest that you put up an auxiliary chapter for the explanation of your spell and adventurer's guild system. Also the tiers of mages, priests, and warriors. It's not really a requirement, but it will help the readers in recalling the information. Please be careful of narrating Aren's thoughts. There were a myriad of Aren's thoughts that were not in quotations, so they appeared as if they're a part of the actual narration. It could get confusing because you use the third POV and Aren's thoughts are first POV. There were some mistakes, grammar and spelling wise. I simply thought that you haven't edited your work yet. Don't worry about it! It doesn't affect your plot whatsoever. Overall, your pacing is quite varied. There was a timeskip, of course. Withal, I'm content with the progression. You take your time in describing the sceneries and events extensively, and I appreciate that! I'll be cheering you on! Rest assured that you're a good writer. ^^ (Sorry If I'm not of help)
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A good novel with a great potential. I'm fan of magic, so, I'm waiting for more chapters to post another review. The only I can say, is that you must update regularly. Also, good writing style, I like it honestly. I've collected it. More chapters
The story flows at a steady pace, and it is well thought. I like how the author develops the story, along with the adventure guild system and stuffs. Idk why, but I got 'goblin slayer' feeling when I read this. However, I don't want to compare it because every story has its own uniqueness. It was a good ride. I want to mention one thing. It's better to re-edit it before the story got stacked up and you don't have time to edit it, there are some grammatical things that the author needs to take care of, but yeah it didn't affect the story.
The summary gave us a good idea of what the story was about. It's isekai and has elves!! Great detail was given to description and it was a good read. Keep up the good work author!
A transmigration novel! It has fluency while reading it. I thought it has a great potential for the future and It cought my attention. Nice work author! Release more chapters for me to read please! By the way, do review mine called "Lumia: Other World"
I believe that the author has chosen a great storyline. Apart from few grammatical errors which can be corrected by proof reading, the story is quite interesting. Keep your hardwork! You are doing really well!
I expected there are a lot of isekai tropes for this novel. But I was excited to learn that there's a moon elves in the story. In my opinion, this story is like a love child of Dragon Prince and Goblin Slayer. I dunno why but this story reminded me of those series. There are a few grammatical mistakes but this can be solved later on. So far, there's an element of high fantasy, jrpg and shounen in this novel. :)
Wow...just wow the author managed to mix in comedy and action and still keep the plot moving forward at a stable pace. I can already picture the beautiful elven girls dancing all around me.