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Jeremy died in the place he least expected in a way that he least expected, but instead of going to the afterlife a friendly god gave him an opportunity: to live in the Marvel universe with a system... well the bones of a system
This is my first time please be gentle, a new writer so this fanfic will be shit. Constructive criticism is appreciated. This is an MCU fanfic with a slight AU
I don't own the cover but if you own it and want to be taken down just contact me. I don't own any characters except my own. all other characters belong to there original creators(mainly Marvel).
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Write a reviewIts a pretty good story with a smart character Im a bit bored of this universe so Im looking forward to him travelling other universes. I do hope that he doesnt steam roll over every enemy. Just some challenges makes it exciting and using clear judgement to solve it
I like this story, the powers and everything that you gave him are really creative. The only complaint i have: It is somewhat annoying and unrealistic that he just tells everyone his secrets.
Reveal SpoilerIt's kind of unique compared to other fanfics of MCU posted here. I like the plot of the story. Keep posting more chapter please. It's so good, that i keep on waiting for an update every single day.
I'll give you 5 stars........... The first 3 chapters are interesting... So I hope you continue to write this novel....... Oh so it's not yet 140 characters... So I will just write randomly here to make up the minimum characters so I can post this review here..... Is it not yet 140?? I'll try to press post button, and if this is end here, so I am already typing more than 140 characters... Yeah....
Great Fic would love to read more please update more. And if you want to choose a Fic to read choose this one. The character development is great, the story even if not original is still novel enough to be entertaining.
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Good..awesome.mass release more.best one.Makd mc Ruler of the universe.. ..............asaaaaaaaaaaa*********eeeeessssssssssssssssssooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeerrrrrrrrreeeeeeeesssssssssssssdddddฤdddddddiiiiiiiicccccvvvvkjnjkmkkkkk
Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. ๐๐
I am enjoying the story so far. And am anticipating what will happen later on in the story. Might want to add a bit of filler with background on things like his likes, dislikes, childhood friends and or how/ if he is training the powers and traits he has.
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Waah, waah! I'm the baby! Want more! Ok, now that I got that out of my system I've got to say very fun story. I am truly looking forward to what comes next from your potty mouthed protagonist.
READ IT!!! IT'S GOD DAMN AWESOMEEEE!!! It's funny and seems more realistic and unique from most fanfics. To Author: If you drop this novel this GOD will make sure you have problems with your reincarnation. And please give me moreeeeee chapters!!!!!!
Hey, the author here just to say that updates will be unreliable and chapters will be short, this is the first book I have ever written outside of school work so questions and feedback are appreciated.
I'm waiting for the chapters of the story ... Man, I think it's the first time I'm going to read a story where MC goes with a Marvel System, if I'm not mistaken ... I have not really seen a Marvel story with any System, does it have any on that site? I hope you post quick chapters.
Star has a good main character with creative ideas and one of the best magical girl this is so cool I have to steal it. Follow the butterflies follow the butterflies
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MASSIVE SPOILERS HERE READ AT YOUR OWN RISK YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED Really great work the author has done so far. This novel is unique than the other ones because of the following : 1. The MC uses logic and is smart about his decisions. 2. He is given a weak and somewhat wierd system but he makes the best of it by the help of his acquired intellect and plot armour(he is rich *batman rich*). 3.The powerups are logical not absurd (which i like). 4. The author makes the MC turn to magic to make himself stronger, which is a rarely used or exploited trope. 5. The MC does have suit but it was not in his original plan (it came with the plot armour) reference point no. 2. The author if you are reading all have to say is that your story is hidden gem๐. Keep up the great work, i appreciate it. ๐๐ PS: This review is my personal opinion, some people may not agree with me. So please dont FLAME me. (that was fanfic reference).Sorry for the rant.
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