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The land of the small, the land of the poor , the land of the Forsaken -once mighty sect of the eight dragons in grand Pangea is no more . Even the prime disciple of once strong faction is now lonely commoner with no future. All he has now is revenge against his betrothed love that betrayed him, former friends that turned their heads when sky was merciless .
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Horrible Grammar though readable, so 2 stars stability of updates 4 points story: sounds actually quite interesting but its the generic revenge storyv 4 stars for potential character design: nothing special might get better later on but for now 3 stars world background: i don't know.i've only read to chapter 5 before i could'nt take the grammar anymore so I'm assuming it's average. 3 stars i have no idea how somebody could give this 5 stars. I gave it 3.2 stars and thats me being generous. The grammar alone would make 5 stars impossible, the weird analogies make it even harder "the clans hid, like a snake hides its legs".
I like this story and find it intriguing🤩 So please keep ip the hard work😇 Waitin for updates 🤗 Àkkkkahdudbdjcjdhxudjdnxhdjjhxhxhxixjxhxuux