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Jack died, it was an unfortunate death but he died, Jack was reincarnated to his past life, and he thought, I can be the best, be filthy rich, but Jack want's to be ordinary, but sadly Jack got the best system.
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Im pumped for more releases. The grammar is surprisingly good and the story itself doesn't seem too bad. Take my stones
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This book is amazing, keep going!ย ย Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This book keeps getting better and better I canโt stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iโll be able to read it thank you ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Wow it's a better story in our coming world...cheak anything more about the story I find nothing without a future situation moment as the author created it.
Dropped at ch6. Main reason - abysmal writing quality (2/5). Bland and ****** language I can stomack, its a light novel, not classical literature, but the way the Author uses punctuations is just... I have no words. I guess, he thinks you put comma wherever you pause in your speech, even if you pause to take breath. Or, more plausible explanation, his keyboard is malfunctioning and the comma key is jammed, firing on its own every now and then. "he asked, Joe what was happening" <-- not even the worst, I've seen in one place he put comma after "the", like "think about the, level up function".
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So far so good nice one author i really like it i hope you will continue updating this novel โฆโฆโฆโฆโฆ...โฆ................โฆโฆ.....โฆ.................
Hope there will be more chapters, story so far is ok but short. Hopefully more chapters that are reasonably long. Author as done well so far.
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Reciprocating the review you gave me! THANKS MAN Appreciate the support! blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah ugh this is annoying, too many characters needed
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Obviously this isn't finished so I can't give it a comprehensive review, but so far the story is quite endearing. The title made me think that there would be a system that literally used apocalypses or something, but the system ended up being surprisingly tamer than that. It's definitely a "weak to hero" type of deal, which is nice in its own way. The pacing is a little off and the worldbuilding seems to be rushed in, but that's of little fault on the author's part considering he/she has only had a few short chapters to get things going and developed. The grammar is a little shoddy at times, but the story is definitely readable. Overall, I would say this story has potential and draws upon many of the common elements that make a cultivation story a popcorn read.
Yeah, so this book, is a test, please be honest but not brutal, this is not an Eminem song, i think it's good for a novel, so please tell me what you think of it.