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The most successful businessman of his time, who started from being a homeless orphan, died indignantly because of being plotted against by his most trusted aid, his own brother.
He is reincarnated as an owner of a small-scale herb store who is on the verge of being chased out by his landlord. He discovers that he has been reborn in a world of cultivation where the strong steps on the weak.
As he adapts to his new body and world, he discovers a mysterious mansion-like building in his mind and is shocked by the profound abilities and secrets he receives from it.
Word Count per Chapter: 1500-3000
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To those who are curious as to where I found it. I found it on this website about an astrology newsletter last October 2013 when I was browsing the net.
Here is the link:
https://yogimehtab.com/astrology-newsletter-october-2013-mercury-retrograde-mars-leo-sun-libra/
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The story about Business and Cultivation is new and is quite interesting. The MC has some unique characteristics that gives a charm to his individuality. The story progresses at a stable pace for me. This novel has got a lot of potential to it. The author also slowly depicts the mystery of this cultivation world. I am now a fan of this novel. I hope that it could continue to grow too.
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Well tbh i really like this story bcoz its quite unique "business system" thingy but after he confront his first enemy the story went very sh*t The first cannon fodder got plot armor and killed after 10++ chapter and after that what could be worst huh? Well some random villain appeared lol yes and he kill all his employee... what a f*cking joke Conclusion: -great start -unique system cultivation -enemy got more plot armor than mc lmao -story went downhill very fast lol Im dropping this Thanks
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
This novel has been nothing but a huge disappointment. While the idea frsh and interesting the author lacks the qualification to make the world come to life. It has been childishly written and the characters are bland and boring. The author has been so bussy with pumping up how 'cool' his character is that he forgot to give him a personality. Another important point is how this is slowly turning into a power wankfest. Convenient events and powers simply drop into his lap. He receives a powerfull cultivation system and has godlike abilities of his past life. He lives with his little sister who seems to have an unknown but most likely OP/powerfull background. Women fall for his feet and everybody worships the ground he walks on. Yet somehow i am not surprised. I mean, cmon, this is qidan. Most of the authors and readers simply do not have any taste. They are happy with scraps and hand out 5 star reviews withouth batting an eye. Ps:i know there are plenty of hidden gems, but this is not one of them
I love how the story goes. The introduction of each mystery just gives you the urge to read more. The MC is a unique character to. I bet that the mansion has pretty much more functions to offer. Overall, it is a promising novel. I hope it goes on until the very end. I think this has the potential to rise to the top of original novels at least that is what my opinion is.
It was fun and promising at the beginning but it started going down the drain very fast. Antagonists are all arrogant pricks that always escape after killing half of MC's friends and injuring useless MC. There is no need in liking any character because he/she will die at any moment. There is no need to like a place because it will be destroyed the next chapter. There is no need to smile or laugh because you would be left cursing and frustrated 5 second later. While MC heals and powers up antagonists power up as well. MC is level 4 and powers up to level 11. Antagonist was level 11 and powers up to level 13. Antagonist comes back and make MC-MC's friends suffer again and then escapes to heal when reinforcement stronger than him come. And why should the reinforcement KILL the antagonist and do MC a favor??? Nah. They let antagonist escape so he can heal,power up and come back AGAIN to make MC even more miserable and useless than he already is. MC is author's little masochist that needs to suffer when author is depressed. Who cares about plot? Who cares about secondary characters? No need getting attached because characters will die soon and plot will go to sh*t soon too. No matter how many power ups MC gets are all useless as he can't even protect his friends from an arrogant prick. He even risked his life to save 3 people who betrayed him and left him at the first trouble. Since it's a ''business'' story everyone think it's okay to betray each other if the enemy has a better business offer. ''It's just business'' they think or say. So MC saved the betrayers because of it. It's not like they will do it again when another enemy has a better offer than MC. MC can trust them because ''it's just business''. Yeah,it makes sense right? Right... (sarcasm) But he could not save his friends. MC is useless. He can't even protect himself and he wants to protect others. Ha! Hilarious... And he even cries about it after he let antagonist escape twice! WTF!!! Okay,i finished with my rant. Too much BULLSH*T and i don't know how i was able to read this far. I was bored i guess... Give it a try if you want. Maybe you'll like it. I found it frustrating and full of sh*t. There is no plot because it's destroyed easily by author's mood. If he's depressed he will write a depressing chapter and on on based on his emotions. After writing a drepressing chapter that destroyed the plot he would say ''sorry''. But the sh*t is already done. The story is bullsh*t now. He's not following a plot because he made it go down the drain. So what's the point of continuing reading this story? Author should just buy a diary and write his everyday's emotions instead of writing a bullsh*t chapter and destroying the story killing off all characters!!! That's my opinion... I'm dropping it. Bye.
Although there are some grammar errors but I rate writing quality according to the profoundness of the story and as far as the story goes, it is definitely one of the most refreshing and interesting story out there. Well I also found some similarities it has with LoHP but I don't think there is anything wrong with that because every story is inspired by another story in order to be created. So all in all, I very much like this story and how it goes. Hope it stays like this and continues to deliver great content because this is the first original story that I have rated twice. Hahahaha.
Amazing story. The MC is such a great person. The story development is great too. The characters make the story better. Hope it continues like this. I love this novel
So far, so good. It has been quite a satisfying novel as the current chapters go. Hope the author keeps it up. I will be staying tuned for this novel.
Your story is nice, unique and interesting. It’s keep us want more chapters. Good story development and until now gods world background. keep it up hope you continue deliver great content 👍
Just keep it up.. please do more mistake.. and allow All of us.. correct it step by step.. together.. remember.. Albert Einstein was make 999th mistake.. and the 1000th is the succes of the most.. around the world..
PLEASE AT LEAST PROOFREAD YOUR SYNPOSIS SO WE CAN FLAME ABOUT YOUR BAD GRAMMAR AFTER READING AT LEAST 1 CHAPTER! The most successful businessman of his time, who started from being "A" homeless orphan, died indignantly because of being plotted against by his most trusted aid, his own brother. He is reincarnated as a"N" owner "OF A" small-scale herb store who is "O"n the verge of being chased out by his landlord. He discovers that he has been reborn in a world of cultivation where the strong step"-S" on the weak. As he adapts to his new body and world, he discovers a mysterious mansion-like building in his mind and is shock"ED" by the profound abilities and secrets he receives from it.
It is a great novel that I find funny. It has potential to go to the top. Supporting it because I love the theme and its world. So far it has been quite interesting. I hope that keeps doing this. Thank you for this unique novel.
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Great story One of my favourite It’s has good character and good story plot It’s a reincarnation story with its own unique style and plot. When I first saw it I wasn’t expecting much because of the title. But I was wrong. I would have missed out on a great story. I’m into reincarnation so sometimes if the chapters go past at least 20-30 chapters. I usually check out. Another good thing is that it’s well written so I know many people will be interested in this story. Keep up the good work and hope to see it finished.
Good story and content, only problem is the grammar and vocabulary.. Other than that, the story is amazing.. Hope the writer continues writing it and doesn't abandon it in the Middle
Very well written about business .The Title of the novel is really worth it. The author I believe have experience business strategy or at least have close related to it, which give it lots of business content and experience insights. Please keep the chapter coming and thank you for good novel
Hahaha. I would like to shamelessly rate my own novel with 5 stars. I hope those who had read it liked/loved my novel. Thank you for reading the first novel of inexperienced and humble one. Thank you and enjoy!!!