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The original translation of Dunia ini Tidak Seburuk atau pun Seindah yang Kau Kira by Desope
When I have a pen in my hand and paper before me, I think I want to write something to cast every despair in my pathetic life away. I have a figure of a depressed guy whose fate is too much: saving the world. He is not stupid nor even smart, he is not ugly nor even good looking. He is just a nijikon (A person who loves anime character or such more than real one) like me. He once thought to give up on life, but an event changes his life. I'm sure you guys start guessing how the story goes, but too bad, this one is different than the others.
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Honestly, I'm laughing my ass off when reading the hilarious scene when Author and Alfi break the 4th wall but nonetheless, it's maybe can be compared to Konosuba but just tone it down and don't overdo the absurd comedy part.
As mentioned in my chapter comment, I think this is a unique idea! I want to see what happens with this writing style in the future, so please keep us updated!
Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more chapters.
You did great work at breaking the 4th wall. When you started with "Once upon a time" I was thrown off guard as authors don't usually use it to show variation but you actually pull it off fine. Keep up great work author
Nice story, I like the scene where Alfi met Megumi at last, and that was hilarious. Meeting your Waifu in real human form, that will make everyone envy. And the scene where Kartika feel for Alfi, that went too fast, dude, well, just like what happened to my story in which the heroine always give the protagonist trouble LOL Good luck, dude. I love this story
I don't know what sort of POV the story is written in. The banter is unusual and jarring and grammar errors are a huge issue. Characters are a bit unreal, the setting is not clearly outlined and information is mixed up. I would recommend serious editing. Good luck.
nice plot and storyline, love the php scrypt for the magic spells, but beware of the typo kkk...hmm what else should I type.. ah, waiting for next update lolz
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