Return of the demon

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Idontknowwhattosay

This is the Author. I am grateful to everyone for reading my novel and giving me feedback. I hope t continue to write a story that you would certainly enjoy.

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anon88

This is a review of the first fifteen chapters. The author has demonstrated mastery of both technical and descriptive skills. The author has interwoven cultivating methods and setting while forwarding the plot. This work doesn’t feel like you are reading a cultivation manual in between plot chapters. The pacing between plot developments is excellent. The lacking point is that only the main character is fully realized after 15 chapters. The side characters seem 2 dimensional at this point. Recommend!

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seeker_wx

The story is very well articulated - and the world building is quite comprehensive. I'm looking forward to rest of the story, and getting to know the characters better. @Author - thank you for your work!

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hormor1

thanks for the new update.............. very nice novel 😊😊😊😊 ❤❤❤❤❤ 💖💖💖💖💖💖 🙌🙌🙌🙌 😍😍😍😍😍 😚😚😚😚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍

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supreme_primordial

This novel starts up as the typical cultivation novel but big up to the author for planning out his cultivation system plus the novel is a slow build up living less room for mistake in the story line

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V_20

Great story. It has great potential. The part I like the most is that the hero isnt all powerful and all knowing. He makes mistakes. Hopefully the stories continues with the given quality. Only thing that bothers me is the update frequency.

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silverloon

I really like the story. It also has lots of potential and is very interesting. Just need it to update more. I need more chapters. Gj author a very interesting plot

This is a great novel. It has great character and world development. It is even very educational in some places. The only problem I have is the slow upload speed.

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Cvpro

The story seems good.. however, i left at chapter 10 as the cultivation system seems to be in mess. Would not go deeper into it as if anybody can move past Chapter 10, then they are good to go as they are comfortable with the cult. system. However, i was not as i felt that it became more and more confusing which irritated me. Also i wish the author gets a good editor as there were many grammatical issues.

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DgodRequiem

This book just hits different and just is plain good. The writing quality is good and makes the story more interesting. The story development isn't like most stories on this site, which just barrel through everything but pays attention to detail and reminds me of some good Chinese cultivation novels. The characters in the novel have their own distinct personalities, and the MC does have character development even though it doesn't come across like that in the first chapters. The last and I think everything that makes the story more compiling is that the author took so much of his time to actual create everything needed to make his world better with cultivation realms, worlds and everything that makes me think other authors can also take lessons from him on how to make a story more detailed(Not badmouthing anyone), anyway thank you Author for creating such a masterpiece. Have a good one.

Good Story. Need more update. update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.

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