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Hello, readers.
I am really sorry to announce, that due to some glitch, I had to republish my book, with a new link. https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-demon-in-a-beauty_19739347405102105
Hope I see you all, there :)
Love,
Qunine.
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The Demon in a Beauty.
Sid ZouMing, a pretty, sweet, charming girl who withholds the title of 'Fearsome beauty', changing to a demoness.
ZouMi full of intelligent, sharpness, beauty with a tragic past and a single aim REVENGE, from everyone.
After a downfall, she took years to comeback like a Queen, ruling the world, her brothers by her side, with unimaginable union and abilities.
On the other hand, Gu Huan, a famous actor, musician, and many hidden talents, secretes with in him.
Their paths would collide, and it was written thousand years ago, with an element called... Love.
What will happen, when these, two pole apart humans, falls in love?
'The journey of life isn't that easy, as it seems.'
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Good start, a rather bold and good way to start the novel hope it gets intresting later on. Good luck. I need to prolong this view because they aren't accepting until 140 hahha..
Good story, it's highly recommended to the reincarnation lovers. Though I read only initial chapters, I could stay this story has potential for 5 star rating. I could feel the pain of the siblings and what I like the most is the love of their parents.
Well-made. novel. Little to no writing errors The plot progresses smoothly And just me being honest here, but I don't like romance-related novels. They just feel cringy. However, this novel still have be grasped onto it. Still haven't read the full thing. going to finish it off now. Keep up the great work author!!
I WILL GIVE MY FULL SUPPORT TO THIS NOVEL SO EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS. I AM GOING TO DRAG ANYONE WHO NEEDS TO KNOW THIS STORY. I WILL MAKE EVERYONE CRY, in a good way, AND LET YOU GUYS ENJOY WHAT I AM ENJOYING!!!!
The story is so good, and it made my cry. This is so rare for me to shed a tear while reading the novel. I really like the story ;-; very emotional and a great way to start the novel!
Amazing concept, and the story provides you a very emotional way to start up the adventure. The way that the sadness occurs in the part brings out the novel, with the progressing character developments for the cherry on top. The advises that I can give you as a fellow author is to never stop editting! There are grammatical errors, but that doesn't mean that the story is not good. Another thing that I want to point out is the way that the story advances. It will be more eye catching if the plot of the story engages into a different act by means of amplifying it. Let's for an, example, instead of saying "9 months later" a better approach could be "Nothing had happened during the past few months. Xau xau had only been etc etc" and the story goes on. It depends on you, the author, on how will you write these sequences, based from your style. Nevertheless, your book is awesome and good luck with your novel~!
good work keep going. give it a try! Really good novel. A bit confusing yet good piece of art! Try apps like grammerly to improve ur writing. But story is good
First day on wn! This was recommended by a friend, and worth reading! Though the grammatical mistakes are there, its already mentioned by author! keep going dear you doing great!
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Hi author, First of all, I want to say: Great story!!! The MC is one everybody would relate to and I love it that way. Kudos to ya, Keep writing!
I started reading it when i was bored. Left for quite a while, but now I'm back again to read. Specially for the bound between the siblings and also the FL love for her father. Its really heart whelming to watch such a family❤ Must try.
Intresting book. A good way to start, it will take you down a painful path and let you feel the power FL acquires on the path to strengthen herself.👍👍
Need a bit upgrate in writing. There are spelling mistakes and missing punctuations. But you won't go off the story, a bit distracting that's all. Over all story is good so 5 star. Read once.
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Really a nice book. Lovely start, painful in a way though but then again its what draws you in. I could feel the bond of the twin siblings even though I am not one myself but as a writer of a twin story... Wow, you did good. Nice family bond. I love the fact that she could come out of her weakness and give life another chance. Cool book.
Let's start with the introduction of characters which is crafted in the best way. Then comes the bound b/w the brothers, love of a daughter towards her father. Carrying responsibilities, caring for everyone protecting all the family members. Especially the bound b/w ZouMi and Gu Huan, I can't understand at why do they fell connect, but somehow, I love how they are, the way they are. I must say, I found it on Instagram and now I'm done bing reading it. Grammatical mistakes are there, but still we can understand. Give it a try!
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Lovely story!💜✨ I love the way the author tells the story, really draws the reader in to feel what the characters are going through. The snippets of memories and dreams that the FL has from time to time makes me want to know why, where or when it happened. The suspense is amazing.✨ There is so much going on in the novel and the author was able to pull it off (even with how she says she isn't good at writing 🤭) You're an awesome writer and for your first novel, you really did an amazing job💜✨😍 I hope you keep on writing 😊. In my library 🔖
The start has put daggers on my chest! It is emotional and at the same time, the pain for the parents to see their child like that, it was too much for me!💕 HIGHLY RECOMMENDED FOR REINCARNATION READERS!
This story starts in a dramatic and emotional way. It provides a good hook for those looking for an emotionally charged story. It seems to start a little slowly, introducing the characters and allowing the reader to get to know them. I like how pretty early on we see the main character working to strengthen herself. The characters, the concept, and the story seem sound and fairly well thought out, but unfortunately the writing needs polish. There are a lot of grammatical errors, spelling issues, and words used incorrectly. I also noticed that sometimes the character's full name was used, other times it was a nickname. It was inconsistent and confusing until you get to know the characters better.
It has a good emotional start that was able to grab my attention. By the way I see it, this novel has an interesting plot. I can easily portray what the author wants me to portray such as the scenarios and the looks of the characters. It may be a bit slow-paced but that is fine with me. I truly enjoyed reading the first five chapters of this novel and perhaps when I have some spare time I will read further. Stability of Updates is also an automatic five for me since I prefer quality over quantity. Great work author and good luck!
Two people poles apart falling in love seems interesting. I am waiting for more updates. Author do not get discouraged when readers don't comment. Many are silent readers.
With a heavy heart, I had to republish my novel with a new link, though the name 'The Demon in a Beauty', will be same. It look me an year to reach at such reach, and I had to start over again. Your support there, can help me a lot. Adding it to your library, comments, review and by voting. Hope to see you there🤗🤗