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Good readers this is my first fanfic it is but you enjoy it
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Write a reviewDO NOT READ!!!! It is absolute hell to read no " " and the pov changes every paragraph soo bad 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Many mistakes I have seen in there. First, the dialog format are very confusing. Don't use script dialog format, use the quotation instead, like this for example. "Hi, I'm a normal person." said someone or you can use light novel format like this. Often used. "Hi, I'm abnormal." He said it. Also, the grammar and anything are bad enough. I can't understand what it saying. I'm not racist to grammar but if it bad, at least make it readable.
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You will not update, seeing that the second season is coming soon and the novel is already over 20 vol. ......................................................................
Well, this is a good piece in short. I think it needs to be drowned.The author, of course, yes, there is nothing you can do about it. He’s very dumb, very, very illiterate. In general, he needs death.
Author GREMORI_ZERO_666
Your quality of English language is really very very bad . It’s also very difficult to understand what the characters are conversing about , so make it clear by using some apps to correct your grammar mistakes.