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Eight young humans are forced to survive in a world where humans are hunted and killed. Dragon ladies with electrical whips, pyromaniac insect sisters, cowboy foxes and other monsters clamor to get their hands on these humans. Join Silas Sylvannister and his companions as they struggle to preserve humanity, with all of its faults and grievances.
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This sort of gave me Code Adam type vibes. I love how the beginning opened up and I love how the author sets the story up. It's very intriguing and I really love the relationships between the characters. I can't wait for more chapters to come, keep up the good work author!
A nice story that gives me Hunger Games sort of vibes, but with otherworldly beings. What really made me enjoy what I've read so far is how the characters are designed. Distinct and unique personalities keep the momentum going, along with the already interesting plot in itself. A solid recommendation from me :) On a side note, the relationship between Silas and Saya is rather endearing, and I find it quite adorable~
An incredibly well written novel/book, I really enjoyed the character design as it was very creative and unlike any other character or oc I've ever seen or heard of. Very entertaining! And honestly would recommend.
Oh my gosh, I dont normally read Sci-fi's but I'll make an exception for this one, you've got ways to go and improvement is around the corner. Each chapter looked interesting! I am amused. Keep updating author~~
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this, you got me hooked from reading your first chapter. The characters were precisely described I am amazed~ Though I feel you were inspired by different movies compiled to one and you delivered it perfectly, Keep updating I'll be waiting for more!
Good night Your story is as addictive as an anime. Each chapter makes me feel like I'm seeing full color in everything you tell. I really hope this book gets the recognition it deserves, it's very good.
The setting is detailed and interesting and the story is also well written. The main issue I see is with paragraphing with some of the longer paragraphs just needing to be split up.
Hello dear author! Your story was very nice! Your writing quality was splendid as it was your mother tongue. Story development was intriguing and it keeps up the thrill. The Character design was very good! I am speechless due to the fleshed out characters you have described. Updating stability was, well it stopped. Author please release new chapters and continue your awesome work. World background was wonderful and I felt that I am in a different world. Author please continue your work and I will stay tuned. Don't be disappointed with the comments of skeptics and toxic individuals. Keep up the good work and stay safe.
Awesome story, gonna binge once the next chappies are out.. What else can I say? The author has great grits to do this novel. The number of chappies out is proof. Keep it up, dear author. May your write more, enjoy more, and learn more!
Honestly, this is not the type of book I would generally be reading (I usually read fantasy plus romance that easy to read). Nonetheless, this book started out really well and has a great description. I can't really say anything about grammar, spelling, typos, and anything related as it was also my great issue. But I think this book is really great for those who liked the genre. Keep writing, author. Good luck ;)
I do quite like the style you've got going here. It's quite descriptive and gives your reader a very vivid imagery of what is going on and gives their imagination enough food to imagine some small details themselves. Which is a good thing. Although, if I may add a small point of critique: I notice you have rather long paragraphs. In essence, there is nothing wrong with that, but quite a lot of people like shorter paragraphs, with dialogue laced through them to keep the story flowing. Rather than long paragraphs. I will admit you have shorter paragraphs near chapter 5, so I think you are on the right track! Keep up the good work!
Your book has great description and excellent verbiage. However, it lacks substance. Each chapter has so much exposition casually explained that it feels forced. Ch2 is Silas talking, demonstrating his magic to no one. Ch3 is talking, establishing Silas' overcautious nature and Saya being forward. Ch4 +2 characters, more talking. Ch5 is talking and more magic exposition. Almost nothing substantial happens, Author. Compare this to the prologue. Terrified scientist goes teleports 8 bodies away. Baddie shows up, taunts him and beats him. There is suspense, strong emotion, and extreme actions of a desperate spellcasting and a villainess beating a defenseless person. I advise you hold off on providing so much exposition, so many characters. Give us 1 or 2 and provide an active conflict where you can demonstrate their abilities, their personalities, their goals and motivations. As a reader, I'd prefer to discover exposition than be told. Instead of 'all the humans are dead' I'd rather hear Huxley's tortured screams, full of rage and despair, cursing Leviathan for her and her people's cruel genocide. The characters' abilities could be revealed in action scenes instead of briefly explained. World events can be conveyed through character conversation, like you did with the ferals. Also, Silas has no personality except that he's distrustful and hides from girls. Thanks for writing. I hope my relatively harsh review won't dissuade you from continuing as a writer. You have some very cool, I daresay "novel" concepts that have a lot of potential. I look forward to your growth. Let's work hard together, Author.
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This is a very interesting start. The setting is amazing I love it when humanity is close to losing. The characters are vibrant and unique, it's really hard not to picture them while they talk and interact with each other. Even with the small lore dump in CH 5 where the author introduces many characters the story doesn't miss a beat in its delivery. And the simple way it's written helps a lot to read without getting tired]
This is not the type of book I would generally be reading. Nonetheless, this started out really well, and the current amount of chapters is not sufficient to leave a proper review. The grammar requires correction at parts. Good luck!
I really like science fiction so I'm glad I discovered this story. Mixing sci-fi with high fantasy is very orginal. The beggining sequence in the lab is mindblowing. I really liked Silas and the creation of his character. Definitely my fave so far. I can't really say anything about the grammar and spelling but have not spotted any mistakes. I like your writing style - you can deliver complicated scenes in very clear way which is great for a non-native speaker like me. I wish this story success. Keep going!
Sci-fi genre needs a lot of mental theories and on top of that, creativity. So, not everyone could pull off such a genre. Mixing magic with science is a unique concept that the author has used. Worth a try! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Sci-fi has never been a particular interest of mine. I prefer literature, the works of Dickens, Austen, Shakespeare, Poe, Stevenson, etc. But I absolutely fell in love with this story. Well-written, well-developed, and well-paced; it's nearly perfect. Each chapter never fails to keep you enthralled and wanting more. You can form connections with the characters, and clearly envision everything that goes on. Truly a worthy and enjoyable read!
Alright I'm going to be honest if you go into this without expecting to get hooked, you're wrong! This is the type of story that grabs you, thanks to it's intriguing world and setting, the cool and lovable cast of characters and as far as I'm concerned it is well writen! Overall, this is the good stuff, so keep'em coming!