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TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world) fanfic
4.38 (46 ratings)
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It was in novels sections till now so I am re-uploading it in fanfic section.
I will be changing the covers.
A boy with his cheats and his phones will travel to all different worlds to get all the girls he ever wanted either it's dxd or ATG or any other possible universe through his phone
I don't own any work of dxd or ATG or any other anime manga, or novels shown in this novel.
Any of the Covers are not mine.
Starting chapters have a bunch of mistakes due to me not checking them beforehand. so please don't just give it a bad review. I have tried to improve in next chapters. So hope you will like it.
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Oh this news ?? What about other ?? Nah who care I will still read because I'm miss u and waiting long 😂😂😂 ,, and give u 5 star always for harem and milf lol 🤣🤣🤣
This is just another one of those stories with "wish fulfillment" clichés, and is so it is very bad. The development of the characters and the scenario is very weak. The interaction between the characters and basically one-dimensional, are "empty" characters. The interaction between the mc and the harem is practically retarded, there is no development of anything in this story. Just another one of those generic wish-fulfillment stories, and one of the really bad ones. If you like a story with coherence and development, this story is not for you.
Horrible writing style, it's like it was written by a child. Lots of grammatical errors and mistakes. The characters are one dimensional and barely make any sense, such as an 8 year old essentially having 130 something future wives and making the climax, just what the..
You ....got .....to.... be ....kidding..... me..... !!!. . Simply fun and entertaining, I would say... But a caution to those people who are too deeply invested into these novel should not judge simply bcz they cannot digest this Fanfiction. They should avoid if they are simply offended by it. Read in your own discretion , no one is forcing.👍👍👍
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Overall pretty decent fanfic wish that it updated faster though also while overall I read it I wish the characters had more depth especially the harem members its grown so large in such a short amount of time but almost all of the women seem flat and only job is to make the mc look good so really wish there could have be more depth to them
Dear Author, If you are alive then please update this story. We all, your devoted reader are patiently waiting for your update. I think and hope that in this time period, You have managed to fix your computer. So, Please update.
What is this one for is it like a backup or are you going to update this one not the other one
Really enjoying the story, hope you can fix your computer soon can't wait to read more [img=recommend] haha..............................................................................................................................
HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
What is this mc is a child story development is so bad i don't have any word to praise you Dropped! ___________________
Reveal Spoiler
I have read machine translation, and this is way better, only if the updates are more frequent, I would have given full marks. I also like the MC, live no one for others to take, selfish but good guy.
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Well nothing to say accept like it. But taking the whole neko village as harem was a bit.............well whatever it's harem I like it that's all matter for me. Guys if you want a serious story then this novel isn't for you as its all about wish fulfillment and about gocha catch them all pokewomen .................
please dont said you is bad or grammar or new start in summary novel....... in give bad vibe to do reader without reading......make people uncomfortable to read your novel
I am waiting for the update I am waiting for the update I am waiting for the update I am waiting for the update I am waiting for the update I am waiting for the update I am waiting for the update I am waiting for the update
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The writing is ok, like there are a lot worse. There are some grammar and editing mistakes, bit other then that it's understandable and readable. It's getting updates lately but they aren't stable. There basically is no story, don't expect much except girl gathering and sex. For example for some reason like 50 or some dumb amount of nekos want him for a master/husband and he just accepts and has sex with all of them for reasons above me. I mean I know it's a harem story but cmon you could accept like 2 if you really wanna go for some Nekos, why accept their whole fucking village and the reason is cuz he stronk and cuz he save em... The characters are bland and uninteresting. Basically the worst kind of a harem novel where it's basiclly pokemon with women... The world background makes little to no sense since the characters are basically made for the mc nothing more...