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System Nemesis

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Author: LaPlume

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Between the howls and wails, the screams and cries of women being raped, and the villagers being eaten and butchered like cattle, there was a middle-aged man who was desperately running away while yelling his lungs out.

''Why.... WHY!!! YOU ABSOLUTE FUCKERS!!!''

His clothes were in tatters and marred in blood, with his body being barely able to function. His state was simply beyond recognition.

As for where he was running to... It didn't matter... He just wanted to flee the hellish scene that was unfolding behind him.

His remote village, the one he had lived in his entire life, was now a fiery beacon illuminating the night.

''Whyyyyy areeeeeee youuuuuuuuuu runninnnnnnnnnnng awwaaayyyy froooooom usssssssss?''

Terrifying low growls and voices could be perceived behind him, and every time he heard them, his body released adrenaline to try to override its limits, but to no avail as his injuries were just too severe.

The humanoid creatures pursuing him were like shadows, barely distinguishable through the cover of the night.

Their eyes, akin to black holes, were fixed on their prey as it struggled for its pathetic life. Their faint and sinister giggles kept reverberating through the darkness...

***

As blood rushed up his throat and leaked at the corners of his mouth, his sinister appearance aggravated to where he resembled a devil.

During his maniacal laugh, his punctured lungs had finally given out, causing his whole body to collapse on the ground and dyeing it a scarlet shade.

His mind went blank, while his consciousness left his battered body.

***

After what appeared to be a few minutes, he suddenly woke up.

He was startled at first, but he soon realized that he had indeed died.

Everything around him was black, without an ounce of life in sight.

He was basically a spirit floating in the absolute void.

''So this is what happens when you die... You just drift in darkness... That's actually underwhelming. I wonder if I'll just fade away''

When Derrick's thoughts started to drift, a prompt appeared in front of him.

[Welcome to System Nemesis, Derrick Tarlin]

[Would you like to seek revenge? Yes/No]

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    LaPlume
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    Well, it's been a while! After having been on hiatus for a long year, I've come back to continue this novel. It's been a long journey, and one where its chapters have gone through countless iterations where I've tried to fix any plot holes I've left behind. Being a writer isn't always easy, and I'm well aware that not everyone will like my work, which is perfectly fine! However, I hope you'll give it a chance :) Happy reading!

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    3yr
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    Saurav_Dedha

    CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE THESE CHAPTERS FREE BECAUSE I DONT HAVE MUCH FREE PASS BUDDY AND I REALLY LOVE THIS NOVEL...so can you free this novel since it's have potential and many readers will leave because of this

    3yr
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    DanteBlacksun

    Una historia con un enfoque que aunque no es unico esta bien desarrollado con una trama hasta ahora bien construida y con un enorme margen para explotar

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    kilua985

    this is amazing i enjoyed it so much and big thanks for the author for making this you are amazing so keep going on and hoping for more ccccccooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllll

    3yr
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    komilib

    interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories. interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories. interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories. interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories. interestin^concept and necromancers are good in stories.

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    kenringdomstorybro

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    ocean_man112

    _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________... yes

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    Riassuba

    It feels good. And it has a great MC cant wait to see it in the future. Its got a MC who is scared of missing out so he is gonna try and enjoy lift to its fullest. Which means harem for all you harem haters out there. This wont be for you. And im personally also a harem skeptic cause they are never done right. It usually is 1 or 2 girls with real personality and the rest are just empty story filling without much development. So lets hope it doesnt come to that.

    3yr
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    epic_gamer_7592

    Its a great story i am already up to the current and i think it will keep getting better.

    3yr
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    Harem_police

    Hello! shameless person here to tell you I have a book that's just starting out, it has 4 chapters and I need criteria and inspiration, please oh please, tell me my flaws

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    Asihag

    Actually I am quite disappointed When I saw novel name System nemesis I thought it was a novel where mc or something will beat the difference systems or guys who has a system cheat And that would really be a fresh idea after reading so many system novel that I just want to throw up whenever a system is involved So I was really interested In something like system destroyer or like but whatever....

    3yr
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    ocean_man112

    I cant stress how much i love this book. and ive been really disapointed by the three month wait period the story is geat and the mc is a antihero beautiful

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    PHINOXKING

    I'm really excited about the way this story is unfolding, especially in chapters 80-92. Can't wait to read more! I realize that you're just getting started with this project so try not to overwork yourself :)

    3yr
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    Kurukk
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    Keep up the good work and thank you for making more. Tytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytytyty.............................................ty

    3yr
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    Daoist36GKML

    the flow work, simplistic at time. good story. i dont want the mc to be someone that dont face challenges... please dont make him too op or it be boring really fast...

    3yr
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    Donnie_Kyle_Ward

    I really love the way this book is coming along! Its super refreshing and a good read! Ive always had a thing for the necromancer area and them being a proper MC that isnt just outright evil but is caculatiing and had a plan. I really do enjoy the book!

    3yr
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    StarOfDawn

    This is an ok reincarnation story. I do think the author was too easy on the main character, making him gaining power too easily. Overall the story is good although it is a trope novel.

    3yr
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    Dylanstan

    Itโ€™s a good start I like the way the characters are developed its just needs more frequent updates gggvfvbggvbgfgvggggggghbhgbbhhbbbvfgvvcvvv

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