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Markus Caldwell is an angel who got banished from Heaven after a revolt against God. He is now forced to exist in the realm of humans. With humans and other "Fallen Ones" chasing after him constantly. How will he survive in this realm and, how will it change his future along with the very flow of existence itself?
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Love this novel XD Especially the mc, his attitude is just perfect. You're doing a great job author, you just have minor grammar errors and you should be good once you fix them. Great work author, keep it up XD
The story seems interesting enough. Characters appear real, and as I read, I could even imagine every action of the MC. It looks promising but we'll need to read more chapters to be sure. Apart from some grammar errors, I found no mistakes! Good job to the author for making such an interesting read!
The first chapter is just great. The description of scenes is also great. I liked the pace and plot of this story. There are just some minor grammatical mistakes and I had suggest to upgrade your synopsis a little bit. Other than that awesome story.... Looking forward to it....
It's a rocky opening that leads to something that could be promising and grow in coming chapters. The flow is good, detailed well, and characters are at the most need the much needed attention. And that happens, this story is going to be soaring.
Aside from a few grammatical errors , nothing that can't be fixed,this novel has serious potential . I definitely recommend this to those who likes mythical and religious novels . I'll be waiting for more !
This story has potential! The structure of the world is very well done! Our MC is a fallen angel cast to the mortal world and goes into an adventure as an OP character!
An interesting story of an angel that rebelled against God, hence, their(coz Angel's are androgynous) banishment to the mortal realm. There were minor grammatical, punctuation and spelling mistakes that could be noted. I suggest not writing so many "and" in a sentence. You could try breaking the sentence. However, the story flow is good and the pacing close to perfection.
Good so far! I only wish there was more. This world setting is right up my alley, with religion, mythical, and supernatural elements. If that is your thing then give this a read!
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Good luck and keep on improving. One more thing, I will prefer the author to edit the chapters in future. And, try to improve the meeting of Myu and MC , it comes very awkward to me. Since it was too sudden or random. I will like to have a incident or story behind it to spice things up. U have got a good story just keep on working hard. Remember there will be people with bad mouth. Don't let them affect u if u want to improve. Only accept the criticism and not any rubbish. All the best
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Interesting so far. I have only read the first few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The characters are good. The setting is cool. But still, you should go through it and edit a few things but overall great work. Highly recommended.
This is a fun story to sit back and let yourself get involved in. There's some humor. Good suspense. Good action. If you're a fan of magical beings and objects, you'll like this story. There are some questions posed in the beginning that have been answered by the end of chapter 5, and some new questions posed that have yet to be elaborated on. That's exactly what you want to do, since it keeps people hooked. Keep it up.