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(Status: HIATUS. Rewriting. Won't be updating until I have rewrote until the latest chapter.)
Communication is
NOT the key to a successful relationship. Comprehension is. It doesn't matter how much you communicate with a person... if they don't get shit, what good is communication? Stop dating stupid people.
"Do you like me?" Jin Mingze asked as he gazed at her with seriousness.
"I married you."
"Yes, but did you marry me as a friend or like, a wife? Unclear."
"..." This guy...
She covered his eyes with her hand. "You're drunk, go back to sleep darling."
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She was tired. Tired of everyone's bullshit, tired of the schemes they all had for her. What did she do to deserve such treatment?
So what if she's evil? So what if she's ruthless? So cruel? They turned her this way.
Revenge was the only thing she wanted. They turned her into a monster, so why should she let them live happily?
But life has another purpose for her. Life is a dick and it was fucking her so hard to the point where it made her meet the Devil that people feared.
Well... it was not like it was a bad thing tho. He's handsome, rich, and he gives off big dick energy... He was the Devil who gave her life a meaning, the Devil who wrote her love story.
When everyone betrayed her, he was the only person who took her side and loved her for the monster she became.
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Modern Fairytale series:
The Devil's Sleeping Beauty (Sleeping Beauty)
Ten Years Late: The Bullied Husband (Little Red Riding Hood)
Beast Under Her Dress: Princess, Don't Run! (Beauty and the Beast)
(Snow White) - Pending
My Evil Cinderella (Cinderella)
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I love this novel, this is actually one of my favorite novels. Thank you author-san for this novel. I saw this in the weekly feature and was captivated by the cover.
This story has a very refreshing twist. The heroine is no innocent damsell in distress. Instead you find a potty mouth young woman who has a very caring and soft side she shows to a selected few. The dynamics between her and the ML are good. I look forward to reading more from this author.
This is actually my first time reading your work, and I'm a bit surprised. I'll be keeping an eye with this. I'll probably read some of your works along the way.
This is good. Honestly I just got around reading this and oh God I'm already excited. Anyway, the writing quality is very well and better than mine really. The story itself is good and developing well I believe. Well keep on wrtitng author. We are rooting for you.
I'm in love with the story immediately! Omg FL is so shameless and bold, it's witty and funny at the same time! XD Waiting for new updates, because I'm curious now!
The story started of interesting. It has potential but seems rushed, at least for me. Honestly, keep it up. You do have quite a few grammar errors which can be fixed after going over it again. That aside. The mc's personality suits the environment in which she grew up in. Therefore in my seem more realistic if it's rushed. Either way Good luck author!
A fun and easy read. The title is provocative and the relationship between the leads is fairly typical with a cute child in the mix. I'm curious as to what the FL will do to earn the title that the book assigned her.
It's great story so far , interesting and unpredictable and funny also. I love the FL she is a super ***** , scheming and liar by heart but at the same time she is kind-hearted,warm and loving...read it as it seems different from all the other sort so far (I read)...... Good deserve a try....👍🏻
This is quite a lovely story, don't let the title make you hesitate. The reasons for our protagonist's schemes to have a sugar daddy is something that one may or may not relate to, but one can easily adore such a daring personality like Xin~ The interactions between her and Mingze are entertaining but hold more realistically than other stories with similar tropes. The chapters are short and sweet to keep you eager for the next ones. The chemistry between them, I think their love will not simply be a 'love at first sight' but be wonderfully developed~
Bruh. If this is the path that Miss Author is taking then I'm all for it XD Grammar is good, always, so is the prose and dialogue. Truly the hallmarks of a seasoned writer. Do try and get those juices flowing,seeing as the title leaves nothing to the imagination. YEET. 💃
I am so hook up with this story. I feel the heartache as well as the determination for the FL to fight for her life. In reality,everyone is trying their best just to get the life they wanted right now. Continue with your great job Author.
(This is feedback on the first chapter uploaded) Hello, dear author. As I hope for your growth, please do not take this the wrong way. I found this chapter boring. The way it was written is weak. From the very beginning (the synopsis), it could've been better. I'll break it down the best I can for you. To be honest, the way it was written felt like a report than a story. It's like when you get homework from school to summarize a chapter in a novel, this is the summary. It didn't help much for the reader to imagine the story. Since you started the chapter by introducing the main protagonist, I think you could've explored on that more. Regarding the main lead you conjured, I find her too unrealistic. To make her seem more appealing, you could use more descriptive sentences to describe her beauty and personality. It just said she's a beauty and then the next sentence is about a totally different aspect about herself. While I read that, I was like "That's it?". It fell flat to me. Her background story is too common for a main lead, in my opinion. Her mother is a prostitute, she's a beauty, she was bullied and underestimated. Her resolve to never become like her mother and prove her enemies wrong is great, but then she decided to get a sugar daddy after one mention from a friend. If she was greedy since before, then I'd understand it better if she just dropped out of school to find a sugar daddy, but it says she graduated-- another thing to elaborate on. Also, I found the way this was written too fast paced. She went to a night club, saw Jin Mingze drunk and took advantage of him. It would've helped to introduce who this Jin Mingze was. While reading that part of this chapter, I would typically assume she just slept with a random drunk person who seemed wealthy. This whole scene could've been written more elegantly. It started from her wanting a sugar daddy to her being in a night club and then they have sex. Then it's "the next day". It was also mentioned "Don't they usually leave a check?"-- I think that highly contradicts her resolve to not become a prostitute like her mother. She was expecting to get paid for having slept with him. That's prostitution, girl. Next is the scene afterwards. She was going to use the excuse that she got pregnant after that one night stand. It would help to mention how long has passed since their last encounter. She was able to produce an sonogram right away. She conceived a child that quick, which is pretty bizarre. Just to comment on how she barged in the company, a high-end company like that wouldn't entertain her with just the reason of being the Chairman's girlfriend. At that situation, the receptionist would either pass it on to a manager or contact the person in reference to confirm before letting her in. Having the receptionist get intimidated by her spoiled ***** getup is unrealistic. If it's a wealthy company, seeing women dressed and exuding confidence as such would be normal for a receptionist who receives all forms of guests in a building. Plus, with that scene, mentioning she's wearing a beautiful red dressed that hugged her figure followed by her being a woman with limited money is contradicting. It would help to mention how or where she got the dress. Then she got to the top floor so easily. Normally, those floors are restricted and can only be accessed by a special key card to be scanned by the elevator. Then there's the secretary who's got a short fuse. A well-seasoned professional wouldn't lose to temper over a kid like the protagonist. Yes, she is a kid. It would be more convincing if she had gone through years of torment before resorting to getting a sugar daddy, but she just graduated and that's her goal already. Again, all these situations are just unrealistic. Several factors weren't taken into consideration and would do well for the story if it had. Finally, with that last scene with her meeting the chairman and denying money for marriage, to be honest, it is laughable. If they met at a night club and the chairman was drunk, it would be more plausible if he doesn't recognize her at first, then she would have to jog his memory. Perhaps that's where she can use the seduction skills she got from her mother. Then actual negotiations could begin. Honestly, it went all too quickly. The chairman just accepted it like snap. Everything went too easily for the main lead. Again, unrealistic. Aaaand, he has a daughter. With that, I can pretty much guess what will happen next. I do spot some good points, not to worry. The ***** and wealthy chairman of some unknown company is a common trope. I like that you made the main lead confident despite her naive age, albeit too good to be true. I also like that the chairman has a child. Another thing I like is the choice of names for the characters. Now for the grammar. I spotted so many. To name a few: "Because of her mother's work, she got impregnated with one of her customers and that's how our lovely female lead was born." "She got impregnated" strikes me as an odd way of saying it. It could be just "she got pregnant", no need to complicate it. Also, it was misleading. You started the sentence with "because of her mother's work", that led to the next part of the sentence to seem like it's about the main lead when it's still about her mother. It could be written as "Her mother worked as a prostitute and because of that, she got pregnant and that's how the protagonist was born." Something along those lines. Basically, "Her mother worked as a prostitute" and the next sentence could be merged together. In a lot of paragraphs, you kept mentioning the main lead's name that it's redundant. Try using pronouns when you're still talking about the same person. I've mentioned it before that the writing was weak. Reading more stories and how descriptive sentences are constructed would do you well. Everything was on point which made it seem fast paced. I'm not sure what else to say. Regarding the chapter title, I dunno if it's webnovel's fault, but it shows up on my end as "Chapter 1: Prologue: Sugar Daddy" The first chapter and the prologue should be different. Speaking of prologue, if you intended to write more eloquently in the coming chapters and had purposely written this chapter this way because it's a prologue, I'd understand better. I skimmed through your other work "Ten Years Later: The Bullied Husband" and I like the way it was written better than this. Sorry for the long comment, but know that I wish for your growth and improvement in writing. If you would allow me, I would be happy to give my opinion on your other and/or future works. :) Have a great day and stay safe not only during this pandemic but always! ^_^ (Regarding the rating, it's just the first chapter and can't really rate how stable the updates are and how the story is developed so I just chose the middle rating for most)
Love it. Can't wait for more ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
So far I like the FL of this novel. She seems to have a strong character. I can't wait to read more. I'm excited to meet the ML's daughter!!
Review written 18th of May 2020 Writing Quality Generally written well, although, there are a few grammical mistakes and/or syntax errors, however, this does not take away from the reading experience. Unlike translated works, which make itself apparent that it is translated, this work shows the effort the author to write in native English; and with much success. Stability of updates The chapter always seem to magically be updates on time and sometimes early. We as readers are told very clearly what to expect for updates and if any issues are there. I am personally very sad that that this novel isn't updated more often, however, the author must have that breathing room. There are also mass releases of chapter for us readers when the author has time to release them, which is an added bonus. Story development The story is a stark contrast from the author's other works (fairy tale inspired ones), but takes a similar approach to character development. For those that enjoy the light schemes, face slapping, and quick wits, this novel may be one that makes you happy. Character design Many of the characters that are introduced have a fulfilling story to them with plenty of details added to supplement the reader. However, the details are not all encompassing, which does leave some interpretation to the reader. A little reader imagination does make a difference. World background There is plenty of description and detail for the world that the characters are in. It allows the reader to enjoy the experiences of the setting and to be immersed in its marvel. Other notes There is roughly 3000 words per chapter, which is 6-8 coins when this book goes premium. For the author I have really enjoyed your other works and am looking forward to seeing this novel develop into a wonderful short read, like the other ones.
I read all the chapters in one go and am disappointed that i had to stop because there weren't more chapters to read,i loved the book,the characters are fun and interesting.good work author.
As expected from my best friend. She gives you nothing but quality-work. 💕 The progress is well-written. Plot was nice. Title, eye-catching. 😂💕
From the synopsis alone, I could tell that this book is very good already. I can't wait to read and then update my thought on it. For now this is just a place holder for me to return to and will soon update the rating.
Storyline sounds intriguing and interesting already. The reviews too are so good. The authors writing skills and pattern is good and the characters are well developed and portrayed. The female lead is bold and smart and goes straight for what she wants, she sees things as the are And is not apologetic about her choices and decisions.