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Adam and the legends of 10 rings
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basically a guy dies and have 5 wishes, watch as he makes a legend about himself around the known multiverse
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1st world - NARUTO
2nd world - one piece
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Disclaimer: This is mainly what I think you may not agree and I think you should read the story Also I don't hate the story but it's just some stuff I had to say about it While this fanfic idea is great I'll give it 80 points but the execution is somewhat bad Don't get me wrong the story has great potential and I would rate higher maybe 3.9 or 4 it's about overall score I personally feel like you should add more details but as this is in the early stages its alright However I think there should be a limit on him (he can summon LEGENDARY pokemon once a year (don't know if they stack up like if he doesn't summon one on his 5 year can he summon 2 on his 6th year?) But it is kinda OP just imagine them in this world and he summons multiple stronger pokemon at the beginning (metagross, arcanine, salamance, and a few others) so there should be a limit of some kind Also he can turn into a Pokemon himself that's also amazing and if he had just that then it would be different legit let's say he's about to be punched by all might if he turns into into a Pokemon with the ability sturdy will he survive? Or if he turns to a ghost type it'll go through him? But enough about that I'm not hating on this novel juat some things I wanted to say keep up the good work
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que estupida forma de inicio y los deseos porque no directamente pide la manipulación de la realidad en toda ley o algo mejor y porque pedir accesorios ( 10 anillos ) y no la habilidad de los 10 anillos
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so there is no tag for multiverse travel he didn't wish for a system and he automatically got the 3 girls just after the poll so yah so no this is kinda bad I would say great idea but the premise as already been done I am sorry but this sucks and not a good read
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Why bother writing if u fuc.k up the title itself? the thing that gains ur readers attention. If the title itself, is messed, it probably means ur work is ****,ty cause u obviously dont care about ur work. And dude, really....acnilogia?- this, u mess up? one of the most famous characters in all of anime, and a main part of ur bk u mess up? Get ur shi.t together my dude....