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One fine evening Eric was returning home bullying Josh, his unfortunate neighbor. He didn’t know how, perhaps god got pity on josh or jealous of Eric, but some mighty gender-less things called SYSTEM abducted him.
He is sent to a planet far far away from Earth. A planet, which he wouldn’t even dare to dream, without internet, smartphone, and basically no electricity.
He gets an assistant System, which behaves like a boss. He became the prince of the kingdom without a king. And the journey to build a modern society begins...
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The story is awesome and I want to read more of it. Author please release fast. world building is awesome and I am a big fan of world building novels.
It's written very well and the plot is a way to different. Reading this novel will surely be one hell of a journey. I am craving for more chapters. Though it's only eight chpts, I am hooked.
Really great job!! The author created a really good system story and characters, a big world where we learn about the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid heavy cliché in an already overcrowded genre without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
I've only read one chapter so far, but damn I am impressed this feels like the system novel I've always wanted!!! The writing quality is top notch and the story is very good!! Keep up the good work author, you've made me a fan!!!
The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.
I can see that dear Eric has a loose tongue with those explicit scenarios that he keep on spouting. Poor strait-laced Josh! He has to tolerate this kind of friends. The lad's lucky that he's not beside Eric in Alvaton. I'm hoping to see him in the future since the system promised to abduct him to. It's good to know that Eric has the goal of integrating new concepts and things during his stay in Alvaton. Though, it's a mystery that he adapted really quickly, daring not to question the system of its origin or purpose thoroughly. Restabilizing a country that's under anarchy is quite a daunting task. I was hoping for you to take your time in rebuilding his reputation and the nation itself. Eric is overworking Kipler! Increase his salary! No story is perfect, that is an absolute. As I didn't want to hamper your motivation to write, I just deducted a point in the writing quality. You're story still has a lot of events to tell, so I know that you'll improve in the coming future. [[[ Purely constructive criticisms. Please don't read, so you won't hate me ]]] The progression is a tad hasty. Being that the events lack transitional and minor actions. Also, since this is a novel that has action as one of its primary genre, please be more detailed regarding the happenings that transpire in the midst of battles, to the point that the readers could imagine what you want to show them vividly. The bout with Evans could be narrated more detailedly, to show the differences in their previous bouts. I noticed several grammar mistakes. There were unnecessary spaces between words and fluctuations. Also, punctuations are quite often misused or sometimes absent. Sometimes, your word choices are questionable. For example, in the first chapter there is this word 'fastened', This word generally means 'stuck together'. I presume that the word you wanted was 'hastened'. For you to have a good flow in your passages, the mastery of the English grammar is utterly important. However, take your time. No one can improve overnight. It is by writing consistently that you will see changes. I will be cheering you on! You have a good setting, and you as an author has a lot of potential.
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I first read the synopsis and I was suddenly hooked! I read it and oh my I was even more amazed! You have done a good job author! Keep it up!
The plot is fast. The pace is fast. There is little in the way of originality to background characters or world building. It’s another system novel that flies way to fast. The background characters opinions of the MC change with the flip of a switch. They go from years of knowing about him and his ways to adoring him over night. The troupes are pretty standard and overall it lacks when it has potential. If the novel would slow it down and it might find that it has more to offer than quick blurbs.
So cool, keep writing!! I love kingdom building and your writing is very good and readable so keep on thanks. Keep up ~~ Keep up ~~ Keep up ~~
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It definitely has a hooking title page and synopsis. The plot line is unique and well-written while the character design is interesting. Building this fascinating world really makes use of a good descriptive, and though there are rooms for improvement, I say that the overall idea and concept of this story is its strongest charm.
Sorry for the late review, brother. Something came up. Anyways, your story has an interesting concept and system you won't in other novels, good job, brother😉😉😉. Writing Quality, is not perfect of course!!! But I hate to say it to you that your mistakes is not something that could easily proofread. Proofreading It carelessly would affect the transition of events and damage the story development so far. So I recommend to master grammar then proofreading It yourself. Anyways, this is a nice book you've got here, brother. Keep it up!!!😊😊😊
Storyline is good, the development of the story & character's ok so far..Wish there could be more chapters in a week..Anyway, keep up the good work there author
Thanks for the novel 😄😀🙃😂😍😘😘😋😛🤪😜😝🤑🤪🤑🤪🤑😝😚☺🥰☺🥰😊🤣😆😅😁😆😁🙃😆🙃😊☺😘😗😛🤩😗🤩😘🙂🙃😃😄😃😁😄😆😆😁😅😁🤣😆🤣😊😀😃😄
Continue to release I'll read after it reaches 50-100 anyway hope it won't be like everyone's equal we don't attack before others attacks us or ah maid is so beautiful yet she's scared I should let her boss around me I had enough of that *king of technology* Flashbacks
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Shameless five star review from author. Hope you would enjoy the novel.