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Nate was a regular kid he had a small group of friends and everything was fine until one school day a white light took him and his classmates away to a replica of there class room in the front of the classroom sat a small white and black bear with a red eye “hello students today is your lucky day today you have been chosen”
Hey guys author here I’m new to this so I’d like some constructive criticism hope you enjoy
And I also update whenever I want
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Great idea, but absolutely unreadable. No punctuation, random capitalization, and zero paragraphs. The worst part is that 90% of these errors could have been fixed with Grammarly and Word spell check. Great idea, terrible execution.
Top notch only small problem is the paragraphing .......................................................................................................................................
I have the same criticism as pro but on top of that you made your mc insainly op (not cool little to no character growth because of that you shuld have made his race be the thing that evolves rather than just gain a **** ton of op abiltys and make that evolve) Your the novel gets real confusing you I don’t quite understand what world I thought you were doing record of ragnarock but it seems you sent him to rwby over used btw Also reading your novel gave me a headache I read it all but ima be honest man use return a little more to separate sentences more as it’s like you just filled almost all the page with words it hurts
Are you going to update every day or week Gzgzgxyxhxucigigifuxucycycucucu vhchcufufucjvuvj jvjcucydyc u uvyxtsxy hgzgztztxtxyccucyyxyx
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Big problem that im having with this novel is that mostly everything is one long paragraph, which ruins the story for me, cuz its quite hard to read. Also the story has many grammar mistakes and it can be quite difficult to read, who is talking about whom.