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After a betrayal valentine knew she was going to die laying in a pool of her own blood with her own dagger resting in her heart. As the darkness closes in on her. “Damn bastard, I will kill you all.” Is the final thought before she wakes up starting at the ceiling of a cave.
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I Like this Story and I think it hast a Lot of potential. Thats all. I have to das but I have to write at least 140 wird's soooooooooo jeah
I dont like it. Mc is a guy, then becomes a girl. The Mc becomes a slave straight away. No contact with others of the same race. NO actual development of the character or skills. First evolution is basically a bus ride. (other gives level up and exp for the evolution). Some may find it disturbing that the Mc's master is a child chick that married a 26~ or so years old elf. (I may have misread that part).
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I'm still in the early chapters and so far so good. the story is rlly good my main problem though is THE GRAMMER AND SPELLING IS HORRIBLE there are weird and wrong words used at times, I sometimes have 2 reada para it several times 2 have an idea of how it's going. and the worst thing is that all of these mistakes could be fixed with some editing/revision. If u can fix this it'll be great, it makes me feel so bad while reading cuz the story is so so soo good but the bad quality is a huge turnoff.
So I really enjoy this story a lot and it sucks that it’s probably dropped but that doesn’t make it not worth reading. I think this story can be called a hidden uncut gem. My only problem with it is grammar and that can be fixed easily should the author ever decide to start writing again.
This is a trash book. I recommend for everybody to not read it at all. Terrible plot, character development and so on. Trash of trash, ass of ass. Fortunately for the author I cannot rate it any lower. 100/10 for trash rating. DO NOT READ!!!!