/ Realistic / In Dribs and Drabs
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"The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once." - Albert Einstein
Time is way too relevant to be wasted on trivial matters. That is why Miku Perez, a 20-year-old working student, always maximizes his time in the most dualistic way a professional multi-tasker could ever muster. Life is good. Finally free to lavish his independence. Everything is working the way he wanted. But when he encounters Behati Mandela in an unexpected flash mob for a grand opening of a fast-food chain on his way to work, life has become disorganized, all day to day schedule ruined, and cheesily romantic.
But fate seems to hate these sudden little by little changes, instantly leaving him with but a new conviction that nothing is temporary except time, and a diary, filled with traveling entries for the truth to unravel, and puzzles to decipher, from his deceased happiness.
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A Shameless Review [To help me see what I need to fix and what I shouldn't remove] I am very aware of all the flaws and good points, my work has. That is why I unpublished all the old chapters of 'Dribs and Drabs' to start anew and to polish it for the last time. Writing quality: I love Thesaurus so much. It's a sickness. That's why there are a lot of rare words you'll encounter as you go on. It's good, and at the same time NO. I need to put context clues to help readers. And I'm trying to fix that one. It's not like readers have a Dictionary on their side while reading. three stars for now. Stability of Updates: 2 star is very generous, I deserve none. I'm a lazy incontinent idiot I should be ashamed of myself. So to solve that, I'm challenging myself to write at least 700 words minimum a day. I'm still a noob writer but I really want to complete this story, I really do...And I hope this will of mine don't wane to procrastinating. Story Development: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) I'm pretty confident about this one(bUT DON'T EXPECT TO MUCH LOL). I made this adjustable storyboard to keep the development concise. Working pretty well. With the current chapters posted, you still won't be able to tell. But for me, as a writer, I think I'm improving little by little. Character Design: Of course! From the characters' outer and inner appearances I think I nailed it. I made sure that their looks are based on their nationality, climate(yeah), and of course, heredity. I made them relatable as possible, Different from the other and gave them a lot of imperfections. And for their inner traits, I tried to show it a lot and gave them different antics and beliefs, with it affecting the characters' life decisions. I also made sure that their traits were influenced by the surroundings/ environment they grew up on. For instance, Miku's perfectionist trait and addiction to multi-tasking. It was developed because of his family's way of living. Which is very full of competition ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). World background: I kind of base everything to real places. It gives the story a much real world it could thrive on. Thank you for coming to my Ted Talk.
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ths is sooooooooo awesome, good job author, ty for creating this storyyyyyyyy~ hope you do welll~ lovee yahhh and stay healthyyyy and stay safeeee