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This is one of those novels which makes the reviewer give full 5 stars without any hesitations at all. I am simply very happy with the character design the world setting. I am looking forward to further development of the story. This is a must-read. I will keep this review short because revealing anything will be ruining the reader's interest. P.S: Author, I am in love with your writing skills. Thousand applauses to you.
A story about a boy, ignorant on the impact of his existence, began his adventures in a fantasy medieval kingdom. As part of his destiny, he has a major role to play as he meets various people connected to him by fate. Writing Quality: A colourful, masterful use of words and expressions. Immaticulate detail of the scenes, bringing everything to life. As a reader, I don't really need to imagine what happens in the story. The writing itself already does that for me. Almost nonexistent mistakes. A wonderful and joyful work to read. Stability of Updates: The updates are released every Tuesdays and Thursdays. So far, there hasn't been a single day absent. 5 stars! Story Development: The story started with love and betrayal. Ah, what a hook on the readers. Just reading the first few chapters will get you interested on what's going to happen next. I would recommend anyone to just take a few minutes of their time and see how many people would continue. There is a rough direction it is heading to but it's not really clear, making a prediction of the story difficult to guess. The suspense of the plot that could change at any moment is excellent. Character Design: Even at the start, there are already so much conflict and drama going on. The characters have a personality of their own: The gallant but sometimes selfish Xander, the kind but pitiful Diane, the naive but adventurous Mikhail and many more. All of them have some kind of connection to each other from the past which affects their interaction in the present and the future. Just my own greedy little opinion, I would like to see you push the characters further, maybe beyond their breaking point. A charcter development that would change the dynamics of the story entirely. How exciting! World Background: Again, praise for world building. The setting of marriages between kingdoms, war, temporary alliances and truces. The special statuses of mages, warriors and common citizenry have their own perks, downsides and place in the society. As the story progresses, the more about the world background is known keeping the reader immersed in it.
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A highly recommended, extremely professionally written piece of art. The story is about the princess born without his father's desire, amidst a world against him and his mother, this poor soul has to live, prove his worth, and protect whom he loves. I loved the style, the perfect grammar, the wide variety of words and amazing vivid description here. One of my best novels so far, and I'm sure if it keeps going on this pace, will be one of the legends here. Write more, keep updating daily, and I'm sure you will be amazed by how far you will reach. GL :)
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A marvellous work and fantastic story line. Read a few chapters for now which tells you how much lovable story is this. The way author has described the emotions of lovers it touched my heart. That's why made me to add this in my library. The updates are also stable. Keep it up author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I just can't help but notice how great the characters and world development is. Although there were some grammar and punctuation, it can still be understood. Keep up the good work, it's a really promising work and I've added it to my bookmarks! 9.5/10!!!
The feeling when I tried imagining the character made me giddy. However, once I continued reading on, it made me feel bad for thinking that way. The plot and character development are very interesting!
I loved the novel. The narration is simple yet strong. The emotions were beautifully delivered! There are no visible grammer mistakes. Totally beautiful!
Ooooh. I love this. I can feel Diane’s pain! The betrayal, the broken promise. I wonder what Xander would do, I feel like there’s something more with Lilith’s character. I love the way you write, really. Your writing is not complicated and your message and plot is delivered gracefully. Good job![img=update]
Pretty good. Liked the angst in the beginning. Huehue. Looking forward to future chapters. I wonder if there will be any steamy sections.😉 Little to no grammatical errors.
I have read significant, but the characters appear interesting. A royal who is bound by obligation, a princess used as a tool, a lover who was misguided, it all has a correct ring to it! Insignificant to no grammatical errors, sluggish but well-developed story flow and the alternative of words of the author- these three are the main reason why I am desiring this story!
I really love fantasy. This author took us in a magical and exciting world of fantasy. I have been reading fantasy and seems like this would be one of my favorite. Keep writing!
Your characters dialogue is amazing. I love how you pace your story, i'm amaze. It's like I'm reading an expensive book, bought from a bookstore, yet I don't mind the price because it's so good! Keep updating please!
I haven't read much, but the characters seem interesting. A royal who is bound by duty, a princess used as a pawn, a lover who was betrayed, it all has a nice ring to it! Minimal to no grammatical errors, slow but well-developed story flow, and the choice of words of the author- these three are the main reason why I am liking this story! (It does give out a Sevens vibe lol)
A nice love story. I like the outline of the story. Buuttt... there is so many different POVs. Kind of makes you wonder who is the real MC. From the start of the novel, the current wife of the king is implied to be the bad person. It makes me wonder about her background. The story seems to be promising however. Maybe write the character's name then the chapter title? Or something.
The beginning of the story made me feel a particular ticklish feeling when I tried imagining the character. However once I continued reading on, it made me feel bad for thinking that way. The lady, Diane was it? Was a particularly sad character who was used to her lover leaving her because of his duty. It made you feel sympathise with her and really tugs on your heartstrings when you put yourself in her shoes. When I reached the part where he marries someone else, it really hit home. This was a great love story. I hope that everything between the couple gets resolved and that erm, Mikhail? Will not feel unwanted if he ever finds out that he is a prince.
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Beautifully written. A love story of duty and loss, betrayal, and possible reconciliation. How will the life of the unwanted prince grow, and who is it really that doesn't want him?
This is a wonderful story the author has done an excellent job laying down the plot and developed the characters very smoothly. It's is a fascinating story and I highly recommend. Author keep up the good work.😁
Its a fine story, but a bit confusing. But very smart though, it goes with the story a lot. The suspense builds up in many many ways and I believe that's the good ting about it.
A promising new writer with potential. With the conclusion of each chapter, the tale leaves the reader intrigued and anticipating the next installment, curious to know what the characters will decide on the next course of action. The suspense continues to build up as the reader negotiates through each plot twist and turn. This could possibly be seen in the way the new queen is portrayed as the potential person who insinuated the falling out of both Xander and Diane's relationship.
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