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"You want a second chance?" A female voice spoke out to me.. my answer.. "Yeah.. i do.." .. with those simple words i was able to survive... and now this whole ordeal really is an adventure.. seeing that i'm one of the weakest out here.. all i wanted was an adventure.. and that's what i got.. but it's really not what i expected.. if i want to survive.. i better get stronger!
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I read the first two chapters of your novel and I liked the plot line. It's very interesting. Also, the dialogue flow between the characters is amazing! But it would be a clean and a clear read if you give some information about the situation and the setting but apart from that, its a worthy read! Keep up the good work!
The cahracter building for the 1st chapter is good well I guess a tip big settings first let your readers know the setting takes place :D so that they can imagine that in their mind.
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