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Katniss Jane Blake is just a 16 year old high school girl living a simple yet complicated life. She intends to spend her summer with her dad to escape the current horrors of her life but is unaware of what awaits her in Scotthe Hills and how her life will be turned upside down when she meets the rude boy, Aiden.
Inside beats all stereotypes, gives you a look on the inside life of a teenager. It's not all fun and party, it is complicated, teenagers are depressed and true love doesn't exist, at least not for all. Life is not even close to being fair. It is one hell of a roller coaster ride.
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I like the way you write it, its simple. There are some parts of the story that i can relate to like the part where her mom told Katniss to shut the alarm. Keep writing :))
The story line is amazing and I enjoyed reading a lot. Recommend to everyone. Keep updating time to time. Will be waiting for more updates. All the best for upcoming Chapters Author. :)
Kudos for the author! The beginning is good and I can see that the author put a lot of effort into it, I don't have any problem with this story yet because it's still new but I hope it's still going strong in the future Keep up writing ( ^ ^)/
An interesting premise that leaves you with many thoughts after each chapter. Writing - there we're a few grammar mistakes here and there, but can be easily corrected Development - the pace is quite fast Character - katniss is like every other ****, going on through usual **** problems, and her life is messed up. I feel bad for her but I was shocked with the swearing in front of the kid. World - good depiction of the society. This have areas to improve on which I'm sure the author will address soon.
Amazing story... Just finished reading it. Very good grammar and amazing characters. I hope it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for you to release more chapters.
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE ITTTTTT OHHH MY LORD. I’m so sorry for not posting a review earlier, but this is seriously, soooo good. <3, I recommend to everyone, because although the genre might not fit your taste, it still adapts? Y’know?.
Um wow Wow wow wow. You choice of words are amazing and although the chapters are few, they are captivating. I am mind blown. Keep up the amazing work.
There aren't a lot of chapters yet but so far the plot is pretty fun and the characters are interesting. It's nice to read a more realistic book about teenage life and what it really looks like. I'm looking forward to seeing how the storyline progresses. Keep up the good work and keep working on your craft!
That's a lot of caps XD, joking aside I love what you here! The details are amazing and the character work is lovely. The world is built well and the story is coming along well. Can't wait for updates!
I really thought that the concert wasn't a dream :( I don't want Tyler and Kayy to get together. That's just messed up. The novel is written well. I didn't find any grammatical errors. Good job!
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Nice start! Pretty fun to read. I can tell you have a knack for character building. I thought the 1D concert was real for a second. 😂 i was like, "so it's a fanfic?!" and then realized it was a dream sequence. Pretty good amount of drama and family issues that keep the story interesting. There are some minor issues with punctuation, dialogue and formatting but all in all I liked the first chapters. For a newbie author, you have potential. Keep up the good work! 🌟
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I like your story!!! I like how you portray and how realistic the characters emotions!!! It is definitely interesting plot! Keep up the good work author! 👍👍
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A great novel by the author! I love the synopsis it really got my attention. The description and characters are all great. Also the book cover is beautiful. Keep it up and keep updating!
The storyline is remarkable. It holds great potential. And the way you expressed the characters is great! Looking forward to more chapters! And Author keep writing!!
The synopsis is extremely good, not too long and not too short. The first chapter, however is very confusing. I got the part that she was dreaming, but the dream felt all too sudden, like there was not much of a background and description to it. As if you were writing it in a hurry, which doesn't really make the reader want to continue. I also think that her relation with her mother is quite extreme, not the way a kid would talk to their mother. You should work on that and the description part. The plot is very good, a little editing could make this an amazing story!!
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The story is interesting with a good development in the plot. I am definitely going to read more of this books and would recover others to read it!
The nice novel got to say I am also a huge fan of One Direction! And I think the author really likes the Hunger Games??? Gash! You have a dang crossover in it! ❤
Nice novel. Found it interesting. Keep updating dear author. Very nice story development and nice description of everything. Gonna read it regular please make sure to update regularly.
since i can, so why not lol? whoever takes time to read it, i hope you like it! feel free to leave a review, i am open to constructive criticism. happy reading!<3