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"Why do I get a feeling that I have seen here somewhere before?"
Xavier Carter is a guy who is having difficulty in living because of a complicated family problem. Receiving an inexplicably large amount of hate from his family that he does not even know why all he ever loved was one woman. The woman whom he had gotten the love he deserves.
Little did he know, that after many years of not seeing each other, something bad has happened. Tragic news came his way and found out that the person he gets affection from is already gone.
He continued living his life of misfortune, thinking that it is fine. But deep in his heart, he still seeks for the attention and affection that his mother gave him. Everything changed, when one day, he saw a vision of a woman.
A woman that will change his view of life.
A woman that he seeks.
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ANOTHER SHAMELESS REVIEW. I AM ALREADY RELEASING THE REVISED EDITION OF THE NOVEL SO THE CURRENT CHAPTER WAS DELETED THANK YOU AND PLEASE DO READ MY NOVEL. JUST A SHAMELESS PROMOTION HEHE
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Nice story! In fact it's very well-made. However, I would like to know more about the characters development. This novel is very addicting to read due to the intense development. Good work!
The story does deliver on the drama and events that surround the protagonist, from how his family treats him up until he becomes involved in crime. I enjoy the author's ideas of creating a suspenseful story featuring a character whose been though too much stuff to the point where he lives a life vastly different from his. I do however, have some criticism towards the overall structure of the story, which in my opinion is told too fast. While I do see Xavier interacting with the people around him, the flow is faster than I expected and I was hoping I could see more of it at a slower pace. There's also Xavier's attitude, which does go through a change before and after he was sent to prison but the changes are way to fast to portray. I understand he has kept a lot of anger in him, but I think it would be best to show his character development overtime, since he is the protagonist after all. Also, the shift from drama to crime is quite fast. Overall, the author has good ideas. I can see the potential in this story. There just needs to be some changes in the structure and some dialogue. I wish all the best for author and may this story be continued by them.
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The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . Really enjoyed it
I suggest you read till Chapter 6 at least! Such a captivating story. I was so shook and I couldn’t stop reading. The story is a little too fast paced and I wish author didn’t skip the character developments of the good characters. Otherwise it’s such a good read! I’m adding it to my library...please update!
I really cannot handle sad stories :'( From the first chapter I already pitied the mc and the latest chapter killed me but I'm glad Augustine survived! Keep it up, author! ❤️
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Oops! I just remembered that I haven't reviewed your book, silly me and I'm your biggest fan so now back to the book. Seeking you is simply awesome, the angst gives me goosebumps and the sad scenes make me want to cry. When a book touches you that deeply you know that you've bumped into a really good book with a really talented Author. Good work darling❤️❤️
i am giving you 5.0 stars.since. i love the whole plot of the story.even though i know you are still editing it.why don't you add more actions of the characters? for example when bullets were fired.nicholas.hid behind a metal trash bin? and if he is being rained with bullets. why don't you put in a little more effect? not just saying dodging.say a little more. like: nicholas zigzagged to dodge the bullets, so that he won't get hit. bullets only shoot in a straight line after all. and a little bit more actions. in the fighting. this author is still improving. but you have it all laid out for the story already. kudos to you and your friends.i hope the three of you become successful authors.<3 oh and have backstories for the other characters too like nicholas adoptive father for example.as well as his family why did his family resent him so much.and the like.that's all from me.don't give up on this! ;)
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I like the way you write it, its simple and easy to understand. I won't spoil much for the readers. I like augustine, i also ship augustine and the MC. Keep writing :)))
There is a great concept to this book. The author understands the feelings of pain and is able to portray that through very relatable characters, and their interactions. The plot is machine gun listed at you, at a blistering speed and I would like the author to slow down and really describe what is going on, instead of just telling the reader. This makes the big plot moments, that are good, seem very sudden and pass just as quickly. PROs: - Great Characters - A very good concept in the story - Very relatable interactions between characters CONs: - Pace is too fast, and misses details. Suggestions: - Better structure of sentences. Especially dialogue - Show the scene more than tell the scene. - Don't use HAHA
This is very nice and interesting novel. I really appreciate the efforts of author. It's story development and character designs are very good. I liked it. keep it up dear author👍👍
The Book is really good. The more I read the more I got interest. The story description the character discription everything is good. I'm looking forward to read next Chapters 😊
I really love the whole concept going on here and I love the characters and how the family was described, the different scenes but I hope author writes more of scenes that connect the main parts as in writing a little context between any two main incidents in the book! I absolutely love the plot and how the author leaves cliffhangers! It is a really nice story although there were a little tenses mistakes in the dialogues! I totally recommend this book! Good work author keep up the good work!
So I found some grammar errors but the book was readable and very captivating I was intrigued at the moment I started reading. Love the way you express ones emotion through a set of beautiful words. Can't wait for your next upload!
The story description and synopsis is just awesome. The story plot really hooked. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon....
this story is very interesting! it really got me hooked from the very first chapter! and im looking forward for more chapter because its really a great book!
This is such a rollercoaster of emotions that, as a reader, I couldn't help but be completely immersed in this novel. While I do think there's room for improvement in the description between the dialogue lines (in order to make the story flow better), I'd say you nailed the emotions of the characters. It was amazing going on that journey with Xavier and reading as so much bad stuff happened to him. I loved this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good luck with this!
I am amazed by the story progression. This story really touches your heart through every line the author has written in every single chapter. Though I read only seven chapters I was deeply attracted by this story.
Self Support HAHAHA, HELLO EVERYONE ALLEY HERE, MY BOOK IS CURRENTLY ON PAUSE BECAUSE I AM EDITING THE FLOW OF THE STORY WHICH IS OTHER SAY IS TO FAST-PACED. SO I DECIDED TO REVISE EVERYTHING AND MAKE IT MUCH BETTER. THANK YOU TO ALL WHO WILL KEEP ON SUPPORTING ME AND WHO WILL SUPPORT ME IN THE FUTURE.
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