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You know the drill right. Summoned to another world? Check. Demon lord that needs defeating? Check. Hot elf girl? Check. Medieval European fantasy setting? Check. Everything seems to be in order here, hold on what is this grayed out section to the skills tree? A hidden custom character skill tree. Wait whats that?
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Write a reviewI personally didn't like how all the girls the MC ****ed had apparently had tons of *** before .................. Jddhdjdjdjdjdjfhxfjdjfjxjfjfjfj
frustrating to read with the must stupid MC. if the mc just acted a little smarter this could definitely be a 5. but ignoring his own selfty cause summoner( kipnaper) feels bad that every hero she summons dies really? opening doors to random people in a random plays? I know its an ero novel and I should spec much but author writes so well it just frustrates me to read about such an MC done by an author who spells like a pro and knows grammar
seriously from the way you have written it ,it sounds like your mc was killed by the summoning, but he doesn't bat an eyelid. he then finds out that the "heroes " summoned are dropping like flies again barely a flicker of concern,drugged and basically raped, no worries. the whole time he just does whatever he's told. You cannot immerse your readers in your story if the characters reactions and behaviour are not believable, 5 chapters and I already could not continue .
simply bad. The MC is not so bad that of the penalty, he was taken out of his life to be a disposable pawn of the world to which he was summoned to kill a demon, however he simply accepts everything he is told and sent, unwillingly, he looks like a slave without soul. deplorable book.
Mc is a passive naieve fool with 0 presence that gets summoned by a elf princess that fuks and gets her previous summons Killed, she rapes the MC twice and her friend gives him aphrodisiac to rape him as well. The thIrd time they bind him to his bed with lvl 50 spells while he is lvl 1.. MC doesnt ask anything about lvls/system/why they raping him Because he doesnt want to offend them because he is to nice, then he gets told by someone that they enslaved him and can kill him whenever they want because when they summoned him they bind his soul to a relic what is mc reaction? Oh well..
A great R-18 book in making. Hopefully author will not drop it off like other promising novels. if you are a fan of R-18, but want some plot instead of MC swinging his back, this book is for you. Overall its a Mystery + R18. So, great
Wooow .... this novel is so CRAZY. DAMN. I already knocked him out after mc fight? / Cure slut with s e x? Then he tells every secret. (Ancestors, farts, blood type?)They go to the guild .... and meet other prostitutes and decide to help her ?? if you like where mc who is D I L D O lives then this novel is for you(cougar toy)
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the description was good........... bye............. gonna start reading to decide whether this 5 star was worth it.........haah!.....completing word limit for the review
passive,submissive and naive mc. thots everywhere and he is basically a slave who will die and he know it and they know he know it so they give him some hope in the name of companions who seems to against this slave hero system probably that's to motivate him to get stronger with hope. I personally think he will be backstabbed by those bitch harem who manipulating him.
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Reveal SpoilerJust started and completed all 22 chapters. Great mix of game system, adventure, world building and ***. I'm looking foward to more. Thanks!
This is a really fire read and enjoyed it spot can’t wait till the next read plus it gets straight or the point if yk yk and is highly recommended.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
love the book so far has a great story to it the Mc tends to lack common sense at times but I wouldn't change anything about it. ............
a lot of *** but the story keeps going on so the *** scenes aren't too long and that's what i like about this novel. and it is interessting. keep going
If the main story gets flushed a bit more then this should turn into a very good read. But, at the moment, he doesn't have many skills besides his "custom" ones. They are completely useless as of now but I hope he gets some useful ones or that the future unlocks on his "custom" actually have a use.
Author ohhdearme
Unbearably frustrating read. If that was just a smut with some Chad-tundercock, it would be much more pleasant to read. But we got what we got. A Semi-serious story with hints of something unpleasant in background. Mc that, my God, comes straight from shounen-genre anime. Polite, kind, gentle and have no balls. But most glaring things he have no brain and for the ten chapters straight, was permanently confused and never try to learn or understand his position. He takes its so lightly, that I started to wonder if he was an imbecile. No thoughts, no character. And endless worry because he might offended someone, like he's kidnapper that was so nice to him... And apparently get killed her others summon, but hey, everybody make mistakes, right. Remind me of saito(Sato, I don't care about his name) servant of luiza-nulliza.... Call it's personal biased, but you can pull it differently, without tickling readers with obvious hints and this stunned mc,right? Or just go full smut. It's a valid choice. Either chapter, 10 he's gotten under mercy of cat-girl and priestess and on a verge of crying. In they light h-femdom contests - Japanese guy, there no need for words... P. S. This thing triggered me so hard, and this just a morning for me, thank you. Now I can works more enthusiastic for the whole day, doesn't mean I read another chapter or would recommend this story, though.