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Ray died while saving his friends and due to some divine intervention got transmigrated into Naruto's Body. what maelstrom will this change bring? let's find out.
Pairing: Naruto/Hinata
A/N: In this novel, the world will be much more realistic and dangerous.
A/N: hey guys previously I was known as bloodycake and published a fanfic by the name 'Naruto Saga'. for some reasons, I can't access that account anymore. and since I was not happy with 'Naruto Saga', I am rewriting it with the title Naruto: The Grey King' with a more realistic and brutal world.
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It isn't the worst thing I've read. What it is, is a cringe inducing experience. The characters are... there I suppose, sort of. I'm unsure how to describe it. It reminds me of a child playing make believe with their toys. The toys look like the characters, but the words coming out are nonsensical, strange, not right. Character development is nonexistent, the characterization of already existing characters are wrong. You jump all over the place. Also, if after writing a line of dialogue you feel the need to make an author's note that says:"What the F am I writing?", you should probably rewrite that line of dialogue. Same goes for the "Cringe" author's note.
Writing Quality: 1 Story Development: 1 Character Design : 1 (Would give 0) Updating Stability : 3 World Background : 2 It's an existing world The story stats of good with a good idea nothing original but it was good and not over used. After chapter 8 or so it went downhill it's not AU but characters act so weird (the best I can describe) or out of character. The comedy is nonsensical and very cringe even the author knows it's cringe. The story is also nonsensical with very forced plots eg: Hisashi allowing Hinata to hang out with Naruto because she would "break his balls with a technique her mom taught her." That's just one of the many examples hopefully the author isn't a bitch like other and deletes a review he might not like.
Really good fanfiction I would like to see more chapters๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ
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I w have been reading this when it started. It's quite good. But the only problem is daily updates. I need moreeeeeeeee. But other than a few cringe jokes(I like 'em) and grammatical mistakes it's... its... G RA TE
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Great work, love it. Don't drop it. Also make Naruto unlock chakra chains. And also add some original characters into the mix. for fun.. . . . .
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Love the story, I know writing is hard. This is a fun read. So don't listen to the Bimbos who say otherwise. Also, do you have a discord server. Would love to chat with ya. And don't drop please. And it's way more fun then any other Naruto Fanfics I have read.
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Hmm. The story starts great. Grammar issues here and there but readable. Goes on for a while stable development. Then the problem came. Character development is terrible. The interactions, reactions, how they behave, and how they respond is shit. There are also many very cringe worthy moments. The author is forceful in writing dialog between characters that makes them behave uncharacteristically. Worth the read = yes should be enough to pass the time. Worth subscribing = not in this life or the next.