DXD Menma

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Diffool

Why wish for Nine Tail and Ten Tail's ? It's ridiculous since the ten tail's is the fusion of all of the tailed beast and Kaguya herself, second Uchiha bloodline and hashirama cell's ? Just ask to be an Uchiha with a sage body or even just an Otsutsuki BUT THAT'S NOT THE MOST IDIOTIC THING HERE, the Tenseigan with a sage chakra mode would have been more useful inside DxD, another thing just ask to have menma Inheritance aka appearance, technique/power and knowledge which means having the black Kyubi... Sorry but these are TO ME the most logical choice to make your story good

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SYIHAAKIRA

Hello there Menma_Uzumaki. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters every day if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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CarrolStark

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Dao_of_Melancholy

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