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HentaiGod

its pretty good and its interesting as well. keep it up dude. the only thing is i cant vote so maybe you need more word count. well the mechanic behind the system is also pretty good where both the mc and the trader gets benefits. his interaction with Tsunade was also pretty good. and lastly i need more!

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The_Oldest_King

To make clear this is a criticism of the original novel not of this translation (because I am already reading in the last update) Good points of the novel ... 1.The things are all in order and you can see the way the world is represented is consistent, what are the world rules and development of the system that governs the universe. 2. the characters do not go out of their respective character. All the characters are very well written and developed, although little information is available about them. 3.The plot runs smoothly. No matter what situation is presented in the novel, it does not go out of line, although this has nothing to do with the cannon. 4. The idea is great and well designed, the limits are well represented so as not to exaggerate. 5. Many interesting themes are presented according to the personality and morals of the characters. Be it political, cultural, emotional, philosophical. Bad points of the novel ... 1. Money is the only thing that represents as important up to a fourth-degree, if it does not have it, it loses the opportunity, later in the plot, it is settled only to a certain degree. 2. The MC does not have any partner (not so important) but it feels strange that this is not due to the development of the plot or the MC's decision at some point, but rather that the MC makes it clear that he is looking for it and wants the feeling. But the author said that there will be only for being bad writing that. 3. The biggest and biggest problem to take into account, of which I almost left the novel, if it weren't for the fact that it has many interesting things going for it, I would have already left it. Is that the MC can know the feelings/wishes/thoughts of the other characters. That ruins the plot in various ways. And this was done by the author mainly to make things easier for the MC, also to prevent the other characters from approaching the MC with any kind of relationship on a personal level and seeing him as an existence superior to them and impossible to socialize. Lastly, this may be good or bad, depending on the person. Is that the novel does not follow the original line of the cannon at all, the story only focuses on altering everything according to the commercial personal interest of the MC. With all the above mentioned, I would like to know if anyone knows any web page that is translated in the last update of chapter 800. I would like to read it again, but this time already translated, because I read it from one of the original pages in Chinese, and some words escaped me, and the names they always tend to translate into Chinese from Japanese and that gives them another meaning completely different most of the time, a good part of the names of the characters I guessed only by their character or their powers. LOL

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denhaanxander

ThanKs for making This novel more readable than It being mtled its a lot nicer so i appreciate your time spent on this hoWever a Update schedule or Something would be nice

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Natsu_dragneel_689

Honestyl i love the plot and its awrsome, interaction with Tsunade is great and the jar he sells brings anticipation and its just great too me at the very least.

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WoofWoof

I have a hard time comprehending the grammar . . .

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Nirio

good! ................................................................................................................................

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AsuraUzumaki

When will the story continue? When will the story continue? When will the story continue? When will the story continue? When will the story continue?

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Rairaidani

Its remind me when i roll all the Saint Quartz in FGO, keep roll it until you get what you want, keep roll it until you satisfied, keep roll it until you go bankrupt keep roll it until you came to the dark side. please give mercy on us and please be careful!

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Alfha_Robby

as someone who already read the lastest current raw Chapter 742, im gonna give a review since most other review simply some cluster mass spam. pros: 1). Fuck with plot so this fanfic isn't a self insert rewrite of cannon story, what ever mc did you could easily tell how drastic the plot & fate of the world he visit change, for example mc seal black zetsu for few hundred years while obito get his ass kicked easily after conan spend around 450 millions trade point to buff herself, or how kaidou & big mom get captured by garp alone after he spend like over 500 million trade point to buff himself causing. 2). OP Mc basically this is like one punch man where mc didn't really do anything beside make sure that his action didn't ruin the world he visit, sure at the first 100 chapter mc were bluffing like the library of heaven but after that mc truly become existence on par with single timeline god. 3). I love how author make sure the reader would understand some important fact without giving too much info dump even if these reader never read or watch the story of that world. 4). I love how author manage to make sure these character retain most of their personality & agenda even though mc change their destiny & give them op power like, though lately the only exception is Tony stark because he got corrupted by the knowledge series jar he purchase, changing marvel into a corrupt mega corporation story where avenger fight against the stark industry. 5). No Chinese Nationalism, No Harem ( though theres some hint of it mc didn't really care about it), Alpha Mc, Logical & smart MC, cautious Mc, with very fast raw chapter release like 3 / week. cons 1). after reading for over 700 chapter I somehow felt tired with how repetitive mc doing his thing though its not as bad as tdg or these padding word xianxia. 2). despite mc being cautious he sometime did some elementary mistake but again I could somehow compromise with it because it somehow make sense of his common sense were misplaced with other people. 3). with the costumer of mc become stronger the world he visit tend to have multiverse timeline like Type-Moon & Marvel so I somehow worry if the story would end up like xianxia where young master emerge like cabbage.

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Ultimate_Gambler

I love this book it is very interesting and unique...........................................................................................

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Potofhoney

Nice ............................................................................................................................................................................................................

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ErickHenrique_BR

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Potofhoney

Nice ............................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Pavan1234

Remove things in the picture below from your story. Remove any Foreign language words or Emoticons from the story, if you put any. Then Maybe we might be able to vote power stones.

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Tam132

is good.

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Drake_san

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golden_fuser

5 star even if it a shit but you will learn more as you write and fix stuff also like your story because i love fanfic about anime and them coming for shop item basically i love fanfiction about multiverse shop keep up the good work