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WARNING!
By starting to read this story, you are taking the first step towards signing a pact with Lucifer. There will be no turning back, and by the time you finish the story, the deal will be sealed. You have been warned.
Jonah is a 12-year-old boy who has the head of a parasitic twin that failed to develop. At a very young age. Jonah is humiliated, and rejected by all the inhabitants of the village, who give him a fatal beating. Jonah ends up in a circus that is brought from the depths of hell and whose owner is Lucifer. The monsters, who live there, were normal person, who were forced to sell their souls to the Devil and now must spend all eternity as deformed circus monsters.
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I love this story, the fear that it produces is incredible. I want to continue reading more chapters.... Please! Please![img=recommend][img=update]
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The setting and premise is very unique and is executed extremely well too. The writing is amazing and the character drama and motivations just suck you in and leave you begging for more.
Thrilling, so bloody thrilling. The way the author described every scene, every event in this book is just mind blowing. The mild fear i get reading this book is quite amazing. I will recommend this book to anyone interested in horror novel.
If you like horror and suspense I think you’ll like this story! On the very first page, I was already creeped out, and felt bad for Jonas 😢. Author does an amazing job of setting up the story and details! Overall, this story has a lot of potential so give this a read! 😄😄
If you are into horror/thriller, this is definitely the book for you! It is well-written, it brings out the reader's emotion. I, for one, unable to stop feeling sorry and continue to hope for Jonah's happiness and for that, it made me want to read more so well done author!!! 👏🏼👏🏼 you managed to capture your reader's attention! definitely worth it to put in your collection 😍
I'm a sucker for these stories. I want more horror from this. Something to pull up my sleeping adrenaline. A goodie cookie. Though still a few chapters, it makes me want to see more. May the author write more and learn more and edit more!
Thrillingly amazing! its heart gripping and good! Even within those few chapters, this story got potentials in scaring and thrill the readers. Good job Author! keep it up
This story is just so bloody thrilling! In every turn, you'll find yourself rooting for the main character - who i kinda feel sorry for. I've just read the first chapters, so I'm excited to find out how the main character will find the circus and all! Keep on writing! And I hope this book is filled with moe horrors to excite me! :D
Holy moo , I was NOT prepared for what I was about to read. This story has an unique and original concept- a Very terryfing one actually . although not a Native speaker, the english os Flawless and I'm enjoying It
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A Nice start! I like the story overall, and I like Jonah as the main character. Obviously, his circumstances are sad, but I won't spoil it for any other readers. However, just some warnings... Nearly all authors won't have paragraphs over 5 sentences just because it's hard to read after that. For dialog, use quotation marks " --- " and for thoughts use single quotes ' --- '. Anyways, curious how things will go in the story. I noticed a huge difference between chapter 1 and chapter 4, so try and keep going in that direction!
I really love the beginning parts of this novel. There might not be much out yet but what is out is very well written. The introduction is incredibly gripping and exhilarating for an exposition segment. Even though we're simply being told the background of this character, from page one we're invested in his sorrows. Your writing style is very sophisticated. However, there are some word choices and sentence structures that make some sections of the book hard to read. For example, "Mr. and Mrs. Caraballo assured that he was soggy with a foul smell that from the first day that Jonah was taken to that house took over everything" should be reorganized to something like this - "Mr. and Mrs. Caraballo insisted he was imbued with a foul smell that took over everything since the very day he arrived at the house." The action that the foul smell is doing should come right after it in the sentence, if that makes sense. Sometimes you use complicated words that muddle the true meaning of the sentence, maybe use a thesaurus and pick out some simpler, more direct words? Overall good work!
I love this story, but it made me get emotional. Jonah and his sister have suffered a lot. I don't think it's fair the way they are treated. This book shows how cruel people can be. Keep it up, you'll be fine.
Webnovel may have recremended it but I’ve already read-ed it. (Kinda sing-songy, no? LOL)... Anyways this is a really good book you have here. Keep it up!!
To be honest, I am not a fan horror genre exactly but I love the storyline and style. The start of the book has won my heart. I hope you update soon. Can't wait to see this book in my shelf as a bestseller.
Woah! I haven't read all of the chapters but right from the synopsis, this book gives me goosebumps! It's really well written and i love your writing style so much!
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A spectacular story of a misfit among misfits, with many interesting and attention-grabbing twists. I absolutely love the unique idea being presented and found myself quite intrigued. Great work, author.
This is a really good story. I don't know why but I got Caroline(stop motion animated movie) vibes from it. The story is just so well laid out. Am really surprised, writing quality is extremely good! The author is superb at describing the dread that Jonah is going through as well as building up the world around him. The grammar is excellent, minor mistakes In some parts but nothing to stress over. I just got to say this is one of the best horror's & thrillers I've read!! Best novels, I've read PERIOD!! (IDC if that makes me biased lol) Jonah and alma's story is really sad. He seems to bounce from one plight to another and the pacing is well organized. The internalization of the characters is really relatable. None of the characters are flat, the worm guy was the deal breaker for me... so sad Man lucifer!.......uhhh, i feel angry for jonah. its not even his fault Continue on author, you have something amazing here am going to be following to see where this goes!... P.S i shed one tear, while reading this.. it really gets you!