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Reborn in One piece with Pain's ability
4.83 (14 ratings)
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young man dies -> meets god -> gets wishes
reborn in one piece with the rinnegan and the body of pain (yahiko)
[i dont own anything other than my OC]
my first fan fic so dont murder me, updates will be when i have time and feel like writing, my grammer is not that good so i'm trying to get better
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please don't drop please don't drop great ๐๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐๐ช๐๐ Good good good good good
I can't smash my powerstone in your story. what happened? I thibk this is worth it. I hope the author is dedicated in this. We will just comment if there is something wrong to be corrected. lovelotsโค
To be onist thought it wasnt gonna be good but holy๐ฉ it is a beautiful piece of work fantastic and keep on work so you dont drop it please๐
really good so far hope for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hey man this is super cool and i like my op mc's so just keep writing ok ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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as the author i want to say i just write it for fun so it could be really shitty but i am trying my best so to those who like it cool those who hate idk