/ Horror / The Last sight
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A boy named Jimmy Shannon Living near a central park that has an Old well that might have something inside, he also has dramas in school while making friends and alot to come so make sure to read and enjoy and if you really like it please give me a review.
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Thanks for reading my book if you have read it, any feedbacks Discord- Aloushyawiky#4748 have a wonderful day, stay safe and enjoy your life👍🏻👍🏻
YAAAS. Congrats on 1k dude. Everything is great. KEEP UP DAH GOOD WORK!! Great everything. Thanks for everybody who's read this book He's a very good friend of mine ^^
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Hey, the story seems interesting, even though it is two chapters. However, your grammar, punctuation and spellings need a lot of work. If you are able to transform the quality of your writing, your story would turn out even better. Otherwise keep up the good work.
Great Start of this novel but you should check the spellings correctly. but overall It's a good start and a good plot and also have a good potential
It was a interserting story like wow i really like it even it's have a 2 chapters. Im waiting for the next update. Keep it up writing. Cheers!!!