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LV 4

LostFolk

For this being a self translated book, not bad at all! I had my doubts in the first chapter, it was very jumpy and rushed (not having a lot of background information). But you can see that the 6author has put a lot of effort into writing! The over-all quality of the work is very good, considering. An editor would be able to patch a lot of the grammatical and structural issues. Even with them, one can paint a proper image and follow along. Still, the time jumps and some gaps may be hard for some to follow, lacking bits of information that builds the flow of your plot. Plot wise, pretty dang good! I love the characters, just the first three already introduced shows promise of a well thought out plot. A good recommendation to those who are patient in reading and want a solid isekai type novel. Main character doesnt seem to be a total idiot, have yet to find how he tests in tensioned scenarios. And seems to be a lot of room for romance and a twisty plot, expect many exciting adventures from this one. (tips for author: - practice world building. Thats it, and obviously keep learning english as best you can. I see no other issues within! Well done! )

LV 10

zakiasyafira

ur novel very interesting, i love this so much. u know? i cant stop read ur book in indo version, u make me crazy, sure . 5 star? no. hope i can give u 100 star, lmao [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 1

Async0929

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