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Twilight Vampire In A Fantasy World
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Elliott James was reading Twilight for the millionth time, when he mysteriously died.
P.S. I don't own the cover photo, I found it by looking up silver haired anime vampire male.
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Early review, but what I have so far ! Writing Quality : 3 *. It's not BAD, not bad by any means, in fact for 'Webnovel' it's good xD The bad thing is the spacing. People dislike reading massively dragged out paragraphs when there could be multiple smaller ones making it easier on the eyes. Stability of Update: 4 *. Good update, not much else to say but there's not many chaps and this ain't been out long enough for a consistent one. Story Development: 4 *. So far for your own original spin it's good. Won't go to into depth as once more there isn't enough chapters for a proper story :) Character Design: 3 * (Would give 3.5* if available). Pretty generic wish, though the fact that he's given a lot of information out and isn't very 'prideful' (He bends the knee to the king, which's logical but he's much more powerful) irks me. Still, this' what character development is for so this could change further on. World Background: 3 *.(Once more 3.5) Purely for the fact that it's only been 4 chapters. The world seems like a standard genre imo, which could be explained in more depth, but only 4 chapters so a lot of work still to be done. Like I've said this' a premature review thus it can change later on. All I can say is read it, give your thoughts as for something on Webnovel it's actually readable and you don't have to figure out what half of the words mean. The biggest negative is the paragraphing.
great book so far author-kun.. can't wait for more chapters to come out this story is interesting so and easy to follow.. ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
story going too fast so it would be great if you have some character development other than it is good ๐๐๐ who would say directly I am only member of my race and give all info without knowing a person if it was not a good person u would end up as lab experiment or immortal thret too much naive protogenist at least be somewhat cleaver . .and u r protogenist don't just kneel down it doesn't feel good
Ok I dont want to hate but what straight sane male wants to be a twilight vamipe. I could under stand wanting a sheild and mind reading ability but, a twilight vampire. Really