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"Like a Phoenix she will rise from the ashes of despair and Soar"
She fell
She crashed
She broke
She cried
She crawled
She hurt
She surrendered
and then .....
She rose again.
This is a story of how the deepest pains empower a former ordinary little girl to grow into her highest self, to rise above others and stand at the top!
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Adira is an ordinary girl who thinks her life will remain sheltered and protected by her family as usual, without any worries. But then reality hits. She is forced to realize how fragile everything actually is in the face of it.
But even if her world’s crumbling apart, Adira refuses to give up!
Join Adira in her bumpy journey to discover herself as she builds her own empire.
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I want to give you my honest review: 1. Edit the wall of text, since, not all readers will read a story containing a lot of words mashed together. 2.You should separate who is speaking e.g: "This is Adira speaking" "This is Ashe speaking" Dont do this. for this is confusing. "Adira is speaking in this part"."Ashe is also speaking in this part as well" then actions of the characters "Adira speaking"."Then Ashe" action again of the characters As a reader, any one would be dizzy and confused with it. I think this is also a common mistake for new writers. 3. Mind your commas and periods, I recommend you use grammarly, you can download it in the google app-store 4. For me your story is fast paced, I don't know for the other readers but that's what the feel of it is for me. Storywise it's good, this is all the things I want to point out in your story, you don't have to worry for you can edit it and polish your novel. if you don't like my review you can just delete it, this is just a friendly advise to you. then I'll review it again to your liking, but it's best to take my advise at heart, no-hate. Keep up the good job on your novel, don't lose the motivation to write 😊 I'm cheering you on. if you want further advise you can ask me, or your other author friends so that you can improve your novel. Advise is also key 💖 As well as constructive criticism 💖 Good Luck 💯
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The story seems promising. The plot is good. The characters are interesting and developed quite nicely. Since this work is still on progress, improvement should be looked forward to. Just keep writing and updating!
The Plot Is quiet nice❤ Character Development Is Also Good💖 The Main thing which Attracted Me towards this Novel is..... It's awesome synopsis😍 I really Loved the story... Author is queit hardworking❤ As This story is still Being written.... I wish It Thousands of Fans💖 May the author Write More n more... My eyes r awaiting Fr The New chapterz😁Best Of luck dear❤
WONDERFUL BOOK! I’m sk excited for more! Keep up the excellent work! I’ll keep supporting your book till the end![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is well written, I must say I felt like crying feeling the emotions of FL. You have a string grip on emotions and words. Good work author
If you want to read a great story with relateable and lovely characters, then this is the final hint that you want! Go read this story now! I'm not stopping you! ❤️❤️
Your writing style is simple but very beautiful. Your depiction of Adria in the chapters is wonderful. your narration of her pains in her teens is painful to read. I love badass female leads, so I am looking forward to the development of the iron lady. As there are only 5 chapters I don't know how the story will develop, so I can only wait. Your back ground of the story is to the point and i like that. I think you should stabilize your updates since you already have 8 reviews. the pace is normal till here. Keep up the good work!
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This novel is good. i recommend all to check out. to be honest, apart from some little typos I didn't see any major issues with the writing. and as for me i didn't even notice it since i was really into the story. really like the female lead character development, and how she craves for family love. i would like to know how the story will develop and how ml and fl will come together. author keep the good work. supporting for you🤗💜
I like the characters and how it shows how far Adiras come from, I really like the plot it's good, makes you want to know more about everything. This book is promising, keep up the good work hun 😊
I like how the story started and how it is plotted, gives me the felling that there is so much more to wait for. The backround is well presented.
The story is promising. I liked the plot of the story. I loved the character building and story pacing. Ut can be more appealing by little polish. Keep up the good work author.✨✨💞
This story is so interesting! I am dying to know what will happen to Adira in the next chapter! oh and Asher is being all mysterious who is he and why does he look like Alaric? please update more, author!
Do not leave without checking out this book. The Author is really talented, she portrays her characters so well. The plot is well written, it leaves you hungry for more. I highly recommend this book.