My Master the Cat

LV 3

Luminous_Arcadian

It's an interesting cultivation novel. The story starts with an explosive scene, which, was intriguing and exciting. The plotline was good, and so was the pace of the story development. World background was explained nicely, and I like the characterization. The writing style was good, although there were a few errors that could be improved and revised. Personally, I'm not that comfortable with the sound effects, but it's just my concern, and it's normal to have that with cultivation novels. Overall, it was a great story.

LV 2

MoYun_ZJ

This is a little different from the usual cultivation tale. Instead of following one key protagonist as they level up, you’ll be following a number of perspectives from various characters. I enjoyed the exploration of a new world from their eyes - with the story unfolding like a first person RPG. The inclusion of the cat is a nice furry twist. Perhaps a little more conversation would help to add speed up pace and add some variety to the way information is conveyed. Would be interesting to see the interaction between the characters when they all appear.

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