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The Mc is reincarnated in The movie Underworld with 3 wishes.
This more of a wish-fulfillment story and English is not my first language also my grammar sucks also those who want something original skip this fanfic.
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I'm in the beginning won't lie, but the writing quality is just disgusting, story development goes way too fast, but, there is this but, this is an interesting fanfiction, it just needs a full restarting and more time for writing a chapter not a fast writed as author did, so I'm looking forward for it.
Reviewed as of chp 15ish: TLDR; Needs a lot of work to even be mediocre. Went into it with low expectations, still dissatisfied. Though this story is basically author freeballing it so not expecting much improvement, perhaps in his future works he might. WQ(2/5) - Not good. At least it's somewhat readable but the lack of proper grammar, usage of commas and misspellings do not help the technical side. The writing itself is pretty flat, more of a summary or description rather than actual storytelling. SD(2/5) - Basically follows cannon events in the prequel with MC just following along till he gets bored. His wishes basically made him the strongest being in existence thus there's no real suspense, worse yet is the fact there isn't any meaningful build up. I feel like there wasn't any plan or storyboard going into the creation process of this story, making it just seem very janky and jaring. CD(2/5) - Legitimately the dialogue just kills this for me. There isn't any monologue or exposition from the MC. We basically don't have a narrator(not even an unreliable one)just an event explainer. Due to this, we don't really understand who the characters truly are. And God help anyone trying to understand the MC's motivation and whatnot. US(2/5) - Inconsistent and after a year only 30+ chps. Make of that what you will. WB(2/5) - The world could have been expanded and explored. Possibly adding a mystical aspect to the plague that granted Alexander his immortality. Unfortunately, we don't get much in terms of world building.
all powerful MC making ridiculous choices just so canon stays canon none of it makes an sense most of the time sry u really have to turn off brain for thisone
i realy like ....... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .v. .v. . . . . . . . . .. . very good stuff here
Story is very exciting and I really hope that author can quickly continue the chapters and please don't drop this is the only underworld fan fic I love and hope that author can quickly uptade more chapters If it possible author san can u make Amelia meet with her son make her feel more guilty for what she done , and please make fenirs and selena together
dude the "the underworld" world and the world you are depecting in the story are two different things....as per my knowledge there is no Athens, hungery, Italy etc in the " the underworld" world...hence the entire story is different from the title...so either change the title or change the story...
Thanks for the chapter and continue it, I hope in the future also author continue his work on underworld... Again thanks for continuing the novel.
Thanks for the chapter author san and please keeping on releasing chapters In future also. .....
Author i really love this story i like the bond between mc lucien and sonja thats a real bond i hope the mc’s love interestis seline cant wait for the next chapter author!!!!
Hello there Roh594. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or weeks if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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hey i love this i dont see much stuff feom underworld please write more and do more stories please
i don't understand why are these kids in the comment are crying lmao,it is clearly stated on the description that this is a wish fulfillment,so turn off your logical sense brain off and just enjoy.
Well this fic is pretty good not gonna lie so I hope you can keep updating the chapters and thank you for such an interesting fanfic
my favorite film, -Selene-, my favorite heroine of the film, among many others where the actress does the same but with another environment.