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Alixandria Thomas has been best friends with Khalil Castle and Chan-hee Jung. On the last day of summer at the beach, Alixandria realizes she's loved Khalil ever since childhood. She sets out to have him for herself along with Chan-hee's help, even if it means bringing down the evilest and popular girl at school.
Chan-hee Jung, a Korean-American exchange student at Blue Winter High School, has never found love so easily. That's because she's a lesbian. However, she could be falling her best friends' enemy.
Khalil Thomas doesn't realize he's in love (as all other boys act in high school). It's definitely not his current girlfriend, who's the enemy of Alixandria and Chan-hee. They're only together because of how popular the two are: a head cheerleader and a star football player. When will he realize that his true love has been his side for his entire life?
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Hi Author! So, I like the premise of the story, it's interesting. I felt the pain of the MC which is a plus point, overall the story is great! keep up the good work!!
The book has the imprint of romance as our girl mc notices she has fallen in love with one of her best friends, not even with denial nonetheless; not only that, the synopsis gives the hint of another forbidden romance. With lots of love for BTS, the trio of friends has their own bubbly personalities that mesh well together. Additionally, other than the slangs and shortcuts used in their texting, I do not see apparent grammar errors for now, which is a great sign. One issue I have is the mystery you tried to add into the story. I feel like it wasn’t properly fleshed out before being added in. There has to be some sort of realism, so when I first hit upon the male friend receiving that suspicious email and not contacting police or enlisting help, I was a bit startled. Things I would recommend you consider is— 1. Why didn’t the male friend contact the police or ask his friends for help ? 2. Why didn’t he confide with his mother or his other two friends about it; ‘cause if the perpetrator is targeting them, at least they should be aware and cautious of it... right ? 3. Why did he date the snotty, rich girl from school if he wasn’t that interested in her ? ( Usually people in love would see their partner as the most beautiful person in the world while he just says,”Her makeup is a bit heavy, but she is beautiful enough to attract other guys etc etc...” ) Is it because his mother worked for her family’s company ? So he got peer pressured ? Basically, due to his decisions, his character design isn’t my cup of tea. Now the second issue is the usage of switching POVs. I had actually read nearly 3/4 of the second chapter without noticing it wasn’t the same person from the first chapter, leaving me confused and having to recheck the story once more to get a hang of it. I would greatly suggest for you to either focus on one character with first person and call the rest with their names, or go third person entirely to prevent future confusion. All in all though, despite these two things, I did enjoy your book and hope you take my advice with a grain of salt while understanding my logic or perspective may be flawed. Your characters have a funny dialogue as well as the flow is well done. Hope you continue to love writing, and keep up the good work, Author ! XD
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Well, it is a very **** story, the touch of BTS and other posters help to establish the timeline. The trouble of the teenage heart. the plotline is so far well explained and explored. Still, it is a little slow starting story so reading more chapters will get you into the story. All the best Author. Keep writing and make it a good story, as you have everything in your plotline.
Let's rate this book with five stars! Everyone who saw this review! Lend me your strength to make the most satisfying review and encourage the author to write more! So far So good!
I love a book with potential and your books definitely has it Can't wait for more chapters. I will be following. Kudos to the amazing author. 👍
I can't say this is the best review, but I guess you already know which parts of the novel I dislike and like. Really need you to start adding a bit more overarching plot, either that or humor to make the read interesting. Alright, enough said. Sorry this review isn't a great one, but I'd love to see more.
I like that I can relate to the MC. This story has a very nice story line to it. Keep up the great work! Excited to see whag else you come up with next.
Since I'm the first one to review I have to say it's a beautiful story just from the first chapter alone it's so bad there's only 4 chapters right now ☹️. I just love how the whole story flows in a natural manner😁😁😁😁😉. Makes me hate being single 😭😭😭 but I just love it 😍
I will be a honest, I like myself a good romance and this one here does not disapoint! The setting is pretty good, but the real medal here goes to the characters that are, very well written and engaging. And to top it all of, it's very well written, with no mistakes whatsoever that I took notice off! Probably the only downside is the rather only 10 chapters, but not a problem, as I will keep a close eye on this one!