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What would you expect when a very powerful being sent a 16 year old to the Ben-10 Universe with a few suits and an unparalleled intelligence?
You get a fanfic that’s what.
I want this fanfic to go up to Ultimate Alien or Omniverse.
Amateur writer.
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Honestly a disappointment it goes from 0 to 100 in the 5 chapters i read. Chapter 1 is all copy and paste, with a story with no creativity to be found. The wishes are extreme and the author does the whole multiple things as one wish shtick. The story lacks any development from pulling medical cures from the either to randomly being a tech genius when it is convenient. What i was expecting reading this was the MC building up his body while learning to make his own iron man armor, with Iron Man being his hero name. And there are more plot holes then a lot of things i read, but the biggest no no for me would be that it all seems like a big time skip. As in the entire story is a large time skip with minor details thrown in.
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24 of December??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
please update !!! please update!!! please update!!! please update!!! please update!!! please update!!! please update!!! please update!!! please update!!! please update!!!
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Love the story but you said you would come back by the 24th so plz come back by tomorrow
Why aren't you updating, please update the chapters. Why aren't you updating, please update the chapters Why aren't you updating, please update the chapters
I’m trying to improve my writing skills so don’t bash me if I screw up The pairing will happen on Alien force or Ultimate Alien but we will probably decide the pairing before that