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Darkest Before the Dawn

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Author: amateurFiction

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Dawn is a 18 year old werewolf who lived with her old pack for 14 years. When she was 14 years old, the Alpha discovered a rogue gene in her, a gene that allowed her to disobey the Alpha Command.

Dawn is branded a rogue and is banished from her pack forever. Taking nothing and saying goodbye to no one, Dawn has to live her life hiding in the shadows from packs who wish her dead. Wanting nothing more but to be apart of a pack again, she is left with a life of loneliness.

Nathan is an future Alpha, who has been raised all his life on how to protect his pack and to kill any rogue that crosses his path. In order for Nathan's father to pass down the Alpha position to his son, Nathan must have his mate.

Though what happens when the future Alpha who has been trained to kill rogues and a rogue who wants nothing more than to be apart of a pack again, become mates? Torn between their values and their hearts the two mates have to come to a life changing decision. Do they spend the rest of their lives together as equals or do they destroy each other?

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    KyleSullivanJr

    Very interesting start! I actually found a book from review swapping that I actually enjoy reading! I will definitely finish reading the entire story. Good job!

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    Michael_Gesellchen

    This author does a great job painting a vivid picture of the main character’s world right from the start. This young werewolf has to face a tough world and it’s going to be a rough ride. This story is really well written and the author does a fantastic job telling an fascinating tale. A definite page turner! [img=recommend]

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    Jacket_Josh

    Really nice synopsis, character introductions, and writing style. I'm not finished reading, but from what I've read, it seems like a really interesting and well constructed story!

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    CodeW
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    Okay. General Summary: The wolf-girl, Luna, is banished and must find a way to survive. The writing quality is actually well done, albeit a few comma misplacements and grammar mistakes. This story is enjoyable. The execution is well done. However, one thing that could be done better is the setting description/world-building. I also liked how you set up the wolf system. Other than that, I got invested in this story. Thanks for showing me this, @*******Fiction. Sincerely, CodeW

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    Sweet_Cherry09

    Very interesting story with lots of unique twists and turnS! Good writing with minimal mistakes. Very pleasurable read! 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

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    Daoist0ZD0sF

    Love the story. I wish there was more. If you ever decide to publish on Amazon i would purchase your story. It’s rare for someone to write about such a strong young woman.

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    Emma_Lindberg

    I really enjyed this story. It was a different kind of werewolfs story with a interesting twist and lovely FL and a nice ML....It's a story about love, friendship, betryal, family and mate-bond who makes you feel that you are there in the story.💖

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    Cee_Breezy

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    TaintedMetal

    Spot on, this is how you do a werewolf novel. The biggest achievemet this novel has gained is that it builds heavily on the world of werewolves in this story via terms, powers and packs/clans. This novel shows you don't necessarily need a heavy set of worldbuilding in order to establish your setting. The author does a fantastic job at showing the world via characters. There's also a good balance at the possible romance between Dawn and some of the characters (or other major characters toward each other). The romance here has a build up, and it's still ongoing up until the end. I'm very happy that the romance does not overlook the werewolf elements. Most "werewolf" books I've seen my friends IRL read often have the romance dominate the fantasy elements. But not this novel, this novel avoids all those mistakes. If you're a fan of fantasy romance, werewolves in particular, then this book is for you. To any potential fantasy romance authors out there, let this book be a great example for all of you.

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    firdous_Roohi_1994

    I am really into the werewolf stories and so far this is the best plotline I have ever read. I felt all the emotions while reading it and the author very well described every emotion and feeling. It is a very interesting story to read and I highly recommend it😊💜

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    ciaraattong

    Fantastic plot! Loving all the elements of this story. A classic tale of two individuals craving the forbidden fruit. Absolutely captivating. Masterful storytelling. Keep it up!

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    BlueSapphire_dust

    The story is promising and it will make you want to continue and read more. The story also gives that thrilling feeling as you go on reading further.

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    Taiwolilly

    Although I'm not a fan of werewolf fiction, this story drew me in at the very first chapter. I couldn't understand why her Alpha would banish her for something so small. It makes you wonder why; if the reason is more than we're told. I love the way the writer uses her words, it's captivating and it draws you in. Nice work.❤👌

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    Otu_Harriet

    I love every chapter I've read so far. Its well developed, interesting and your writing skills are exceptional. Glued at just the read of a chapter. Well done author and thanks for this great novel.

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    TishKim
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    Short and interesting story to read. Binge read ut in two days. Its not too expensive to unlock chapters. A few gramatical or typing errors but who doesnt have that

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    Roxanne_Quezada

    Excellent story a definite must read! I like the fact that she gets her happily ever after with a Mate of her choice after being subjected to so much hardship.

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    Becky_Wilson_0780

    This is an entertaining short story of 47 chapters. It is definitely worth the read. The novel ette develops a strong female lead of a pre shift teenage wolf who is abandoned to fend for herself.

    2yr
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    AlvarieB

    Enjoyed this very much! It was a simple read but there was enough to vision the story. I had my doubts at first but I ended up purchasing the whole thing because I couldn't stop reading. I love the happy ending and the pairing, it was my "ship" since they first met. Thank you for the good read. 😁

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