catvi

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  • Joined Feb 2018
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  • I like japanese novels better

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  • Cast Under Ellitis

    Cast Under Ellitis

    Fantasy

    Ellitis, a world of sword and magic. Massive in size, with most of its surface unexplored. Where dragons and spirits dwell amongst men and demi-humans, where gods and devils alike barter with mortals and immortals. Beautiful as it might seem, mystical even, Ellitis is not a world for the frail. It is a place where the strong prey upon the weak, and where the weak struggle with every fiber of their being to overthrow the strong. It is here, in an unsuspecting corner of this world, that an unfortunate soul was born an orphan by the mischief of beings untold. Eliot Wyon, formerly known as Eliot Alderman, was just a mediocre engineering student in his past life. Perhaps without any help, this life of his will be just as boring as his last. But throw in an impish ex-goddess to help him along. Maybe, just maybe, he could make this life a bit more interesting. I guess, we’d just have to wait and see. **Author's Note** Hello Everyone, I am Vi, Cat Vi. This is my first attempt at writing a story. I am a complete beginner at this. The closest thing to an organized story I’ve ever written is essay reports back in high school. There might be syntax errors and weird language all over the place. So, apologies in advance. I’ll be trying my best to make this story as interesting as possible, and with your feedback I am sure I can make something nice out of it. Constructive criticism is appreciated. And you are welcome to comment any errors you might notice. I’ll try to fix them up as soon as I can. For now, I don’t have a schedule. But if the story gets traction, I will try to work something out. **Cover Image Drawn by me.

Moments

real world events? must've been the most incompetent operation in the history of marines. View More

Neobear: well... this is kinda based on real world events so... yes... they can be so dumb~

Out of Space · C343
1 day ago
Tons of character building for drake that ends in a 'death' very boring and abrupt. So what were those earlier chapters for?
Nothing but padding word count?
I suspect if you even story board. but at the end of the day this is your story, and write how you will.
But when i figured out you have no plan and are randomly cutting out parts of the story you added b4 but dont want to follow through, well, that felt like a betrayal.
It feels more like you spread the plot too thin and now are deleting some characters and relationships to concentrate on the main plot. (like the one with the dr hearing whispers. no conclusion no nothing)
If you cannot conclude a plotline (drake, irisval, etc etc etc), then why start it in the first place?
It might not feel like this to you, but to the reader it is very jarring.
Death happens in a novel, and i would have been fine with a tragedy if the death was executed nicely.
Here, it felt like "I dont wanna write this character anymore, into the rubbish ya go."
Even in real life marines would not send people on a suicide mission where 2 people have to fight against thousands. And more over, this is a fiction. People dont read fiction where the marines are dumber than real life ones. View More

Neobear: thanks for reading for so long, but this **** happened in real life, so why not in a novel? If you go look at the history of military failures... there's TONS of such examples. So why would it unreal and fake if a fledging military makes such mistakes?

Out of Space · C343
1 day ago
I don't like people who have less IQ then a terminally ill goldfish. View More

Ace20: I don’t like people who don’t make books but insults other people books

Reincarnation of a living god
1 day ago
Why do you keep making these convoluted plot points? Real marines will never send reinforcement, only 2, just to die.
Not to mention how Mills and co operated.
Its so forced, it feels fake. All that buildup, for nothing.
Well now i am guessing they gonna be a big chapter of drakes death reveal to irisval.
And then she joins the military for vengenve and something.
So forced, i am very dissapointed in the author.
I was planning on supporting on patreon, but some little things kept piling up that stopped me like the betrayal arc, how they ignored evelyn, how incompetent the marines are.... well unfortunately now i have to drop this out of my library. will be leaving a review here and or rr soon.
Good luck to author. View More
Out of Space · C343
1 week ago
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Out of Space · C356
1 week ago
I still cant believe you killed of drake and kont for plotpoint. View More
Out of Space · C356
1 week ago
This makes no fucking sense. The marines cant be that dumb? Sending people to die and reinforcement not making in time. View More
Out of Space · C343
1 week ago
Why is drake dead???? View More
Out of Space · C343
1 week ago

GreatLeecher: Wow this author is really shameless, 3 times of deleted review already cause it was getting likes from the readers since they can relate to what I said that it was full of inconsistency and we,with the author, even argued about it but dude just said "go make your own novel and make one thats better than harry potter lmao. So here I am again to make a review to counter your shamelessness of deleting low rating reviews.

** Im gonna make one again if you delete this again so yah

Fate Online: Shadow
2 weeks ago

midasgalsen: Ah ok I just typed Tokyo instead of Tokyo city, that's right Tokyo city is 600 km^2

I'm the King Of Technology · C2
3 weeks ago
That is Tokyo COUNTY, not City. City of tokyo is 600 km^2. Author said Baymard was a City right? View More

midasgalsen: Why when I google it say Tokyo 2188 km^2?

I'm the King Of Technology · C2
3 weeks ago
tokyo is 600 km^2.... is the author just pulling facts out of his ass? View More
I'm the King Of Technology · C2
3 weeks ago
comepltely agree. the story is becoming full with plotholes that are becoming harder and harder to ignore. the author said that we would know why he was so poor suddenly after 1 or 2 chapters. but it's been like 20 chapters and still nothing.
It feels cheap at this point.
I am sure he doesnt really read comments either. View More

Darian: Thanks for sharing your story with us; it’s a different perspective on the usual reincarnation/cultivation tropes.

I have just finished reading through here, and I still feel that you haven’t explained QF’s sudden lack of money. If things in town are more expensive than he expected, that should have increased rather than decreased the value of the 2/3 of his medicines that he hadn’t sold before. Furthermore, he had 25,000 gold coins on him. He complains over spending 13,000 silver on a lousy sword, when that is less than one percent of his stash. And that was the only major purchase I saw mentioned. Unless he was robbed or I missed something significant, he should still have a huge pile of gold on hand.

From a story perspective, I can understand you wanting him to be faced with financial difficulties. But to achieve those difficulties, you needed to not let him become so rich in the first place. For instance, the original medicine shop could have declined to purchase his herbs, explaining they don’t have enough gold on hand and could only offer him other medicines in trade. Even then, though, this new city (as the seat of a Duke) should be large enough to have better trading options than the former town (seat of a Marquis).

Simply Trading · C201
1 month ago
this is dragging out so much. does the prince really have, like REALLY have to have monologues and assumptions about every single goddamn thing before the plot progresses? why bother mentioning them anyway.
The quality is really going downhill man. this is dragging way too much. and other people are noticing too. @Lythande View More
Simply Trading · C199
1 month ago
so first he thinks about how much his mum eats, a few paragraphs. then suddenly again about the yue'an daughter. then again about wondering how his mum went through the interrogation.
that's three monologues right there that completely doesnt push the plot forward.
definitely dragging on. View More
Simply Trading · C198
1 month ago
i feel like the chapters now are purposely dragging. Like it ALWAYS goes of into a tangent when something happens. And to get to the main matter at hand, here that being the talk with duchess, there needs to be at least three monologue chapters.
Bad habit. View More
Simply Trading · C198
1 month ago
was about to ask the same thing. View More

FNU_LNU: Didnt he earn a lot from selling those herbs in first city? Shouldnt he have something like 25k gold with him? How is he penniless all of the sudden? Did i miss smth?

Simply Trading · C174
1 month ago

FNU_LNU: Didnt he earn a lot from selling those herbs in first city? Shouldnt he have something like 25k gold with him? How is he penniless all of the sudden? Did i miss smth?

Simply Trading · C174
1 month ago

catvi: "I left this review alone because it simply didn’t fit i to the above mentioned categories simple."
Such arrogance, as if we are thankful you didn't simply delete this. Oh how merciful of you, Great Deleter of Reviews.

Guild Wars
1 month ago
you keep mention he will run away from here over and over and over and over and over and over again.
Getting a bit annoying.
readers arent stupid. you dont have to remind us so many times.
And frankly, it ruins the foreshadowing.
OBVIOUSLY he wont be able to do it and be caught in some mess. View More
Simply Trading · C162
1 month ago
the author deleted a real review the reviewer put his time and effort into. and now he is making that info public. perfectly fine. View More

Sin_of_Sloth: Not really, it could just be an author who is weak to criticism and therefore deletes it. I honestly don’t think the current review is relevant to the story in any way. It seems to be a jab at the author more than anything else.

Guild Wars
1 month ago
yuan mei? View More
Simply Trading · C99
1 month ago
why? it provides true information about the story and the author. that they delete reviews. that's something we readers need to know :D View More

Sin_of_Sloth: Ultimately the current review is not valid. Please delete the current review, or make a constructive review.

Guild Wars
1 month ago

Mytaw: Well, with all that said I think we both learned something from this, always remember the screenshots and to post it on Reddit or Imgur and if they come just post a link for it. Cheers!

Guild Wars
1 month ago

Mytaw: Things aren't so black and white, as I've already estated, I personally think you were deleting angry reviews or what could be slander just because they look like it, like a hater's comment, but maybe, you didn't even tried to discuss and went for violence or the delete button, if you looked into it, talked with the person responsible for it, maybe you could get a reasonable answer from a reasonable person and maybe people wouldn't be saying that you unjustifiably go around deleting reviews, in which your rate would be more consistent with the rating of the novel itself

Guild Wars
1 month ago

Mytaw: Does that make my entire redaction of why your 'ideals are bad' wrong? I started talking about this situation and not that, as I've already said, I don't believe you are a bad guy based on your reviews but even if that case you did that my main point is about reviews that don't have any criticism value on them and why you shouldn't erase them

Guild Wars
1 month ago

Mytaw: Don’t try to act like the right one here, before deleting a review try to act like an ad'ult (for some weird f*cking reason, the word adu'lt is censored) and talk with the poster.

If no answer is provided or its comp roved that he is just a troll go ahead and delete it, in case of false accusations just screenshot it, or in this case, even if the review became redundant you can’t just go deleting it.

Deleting reviews for the simple fact that they didn’t said anything is retarded, what if he had a good reason to do it but didn’t want to write as much as I am doing myself? why didn’t you just asked him?

And in my opinion at least, even if a review is harmful as you yourself said, I wouldn’t delete it straightaway try to converse with they, maybe they are just disappointed or misinformed about the novel and you could change his or her opinion but nooo, just delete it

its wayyy to naive to think that just because a review doesn’t show any criticism value the opinion of the poster is worthless

If you can prove me wrong, I would gladly delete my comment, but for argument sake please appoint proof that I am wrong in any way.
**: you dont look like an *sshole but your "ideals" about deleting reviews, in which you act like a god that is capable of deleting anything he doesnt like is pure bullsh*t

Guild Wars
1 month ago

Mournblade: Nope. As you might have discovered by now, the women are generally distractions for our extremely focused hero. Might throw in a love interest later.

Simply Trading
1 month ago
well atleast the flashback seems interesting. Hoping it wont turn into a harem though. GG author. keep it up View More
Simply Trading · C78
1 month ago
damn so this flashback lasts for like what? 60 chapters? the plot is regressing rather than progressing.... sigh... View More
Simply Trading · C69
1 month ago
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