catvi

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  • Cast Under Ellitis

    Cast Under Ellitis

    Fantasy

    Ellitis, a world of sword and magic. Massive in size, with most of its surface unexplored. Where dragons and spirits dwell amongst men and demi-humans, where gods and devils alike barter with mortals and immortals. Beautiful as it might seem, mystical even, Ellitis is not a world for the frail. It is a place where the strong prey upon the weak, and where the weak struggle with every fiber of their being to overthrow the strong. It is here, in an unsuspecting corner of this world, that an unfortunate soul was born an orphan by the mischief of beings untold. Eliot Wyon, formerly known as Eliot Alderman, was just a mediocre engineering student in his past life. Perhaps without any help, this life of his will be just as boring as his last. But throw in an impish ex-goddess to help him along. Maybe, just maybe, he could make this life a bit more interesting. I guess, we’d just have to wait and see. **Author's Note** Hello Everyone, I am Vi, Cat Vi. This is my first attempt at writing a story. I am a complete beginner at this. The closest thing to an organized story I’ve ever written is essay reports back in high school. There might be syntax errors and weird language all over the place. So, apologies in advance. I’ll be trying my best to make this story as interesting as possible, and with your feedback I am sure I can make something nice out of it. Constructive criticism is appreciated. And you are welcome to comment any errors you might notice. I’ll try to fix them up as soon as I can. For now, I don’t have a schedule. But if the story gets traction, I will try to work something out. **Cover Image Drawn by me.

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WheeledWriter: I've added an auxiliary chapter that explains my choice to use Chinese terms that are difficult to directly translate accurately from the Character perceptions

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C14
3 days ago

WheeledWriter: I've added an auxiliary chapter that explains my chose to use Chinese time measurements that are difficult to directly translate from the Character perceptions. As for losing time track - there are regular mentions of how many days to specific points in time (the village market, for example) and sunrise/sunset.

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C15
3 days ago

WheeledWriter: I have written an Auxiliary chapter explaining why the female MC has her own plot and story which is not secondary to the male's

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C16
3 days ago

WheeledWriter: Yes, Thanks for pointing that out. I missed a few in the earlier chapters. I think I have fixed all of the time references using the untranslatable terms

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C15
3 days ago

WheeledWriter: I have written an auxiliary chapter explaining the use of Chinese pinyin words in the novel.

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C13
3 days ago

WheeledWriter: I know. At some point when my writing skills have improved, I will go back and probably rewrite a lot of the earlier stuff. Thanks for reminding me.

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C10
3 days ago

WheeledWriter: Except he's a young boy - with his only source of the way things should be in cultivation in fairy tales. And the Hero always beats the hoards of stepping stones, right? Other readers are saying my characters are too grown up for their age, but you seem to be suggesting he's too childish? In the end I have to write the character to what feels right for me. I apologise if this is annoying.

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C13
3 days ago
much better View More
My Future Self is Ruining My Life! · C2
4 days ago
Use paragraph this is unreadable really View More
My Future Self is Ruining My Life! · C1
4 days ago

catvi: It's like the author had multiple story ideas and put them into a mishmash of one.
He has two simultaneous storylines going on, for the ml and fl.
But it was soooooooooooooo arbitrary. Like the story style changes completely from the first dozen chapter.
The author tells the reader to read every other chapter if we prefer one protag over the other.
But then why even write the story that way?
I can't go on reading a story knowing I am probably going to miss half of it. I read till chapter 66, so I know if you read only every other chapter, you would miss a BUNCH of infodumps and worldbuildings.
So what's even the point of saying " If you prefer to only read one or the other lead, just read every other chapter of your preference." if the reader is missing a lot of the technical details.
And it's honestly hard to get immersed in a story where each next chapter is about another protagonist.
So rather than multiple good stories, we have a mediocre one.
Not worth the time. I gave story dev a 1 star.
The author also used 2 different time units, for usual things he uses day, minute, second, week, year etcetc but then he inserts ancient chinese time units like shi, shun, ke. Its very confusing.
The writing does improve though. but it's still very confusing.

Treasures of Heaven and Earth
4 days ago
Reading Status: C66
It's like the author had multiple story ideas and put them into a mishmash of one.
He has two simultaneous storylines going on, for the ml and fl.
But it was soooooooooooooo arbitrary. Like the story style changes completely from the first dozen chapter.
The author tells the reader to read every other chapter if we prefer one protag over the other.
But then why even write the story that way?
I can't go on reading a story knowing I am probably going to miss half of it. I read till chapter 66, so I know if you read only every other chapter, you would miss a BUNCH of infodumps and worldbuildings.
So what's even the point of saying " If you prefer to only read one or the other lead, just read every other chapter of your preference." if the reader is missing a lot of the technical details.
And it's honestly hard to get immersed in a story where each next chapter is about another protagonist.
So rather than multiple good stories, we have a mediocre one.
Not worth the time. I gave story dev a 1 star.
The author also used 2 different time units, for usual things he uses day, minute, second, week, year etcetc but then he inserts ancient chinese time units like shi, shun, ke. Its very confusing.
The writing does improve though. but it's still very confusing. View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth
4 days ago
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Treasures of Heaven and Earth
4 days ago
is this another story? View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C16
4 days ago
basically i completely disagree with your third point. It gives of a fake feeling, not a deeper one. View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C15
4 days ago
not to mention, you have already used hours, minutes and seconds. so using two different time systems in the same novel makes no sense. It's confusing as hell and just plain bad writing. Hope you don't mind, just saying my thoughts here View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C15
4 days ago
It does nothing to the reader though. It makes things more complex to understand. As you can see there has already been 2 complaints and no compliments.
It feels more like fluff, like the novel is trying to 'assume' a grand pose, rather than expressing it via writing.
These things make us completely lose track of time in the novel, which is bad. View More

WheeledWriter: A couple of different reasons:

1) As this is as world influenced by Ancient Chinese culture, ancient Chinese legend and populated by people from very ancient China (I will eventually address why - although you may have been able to spot a few clues in the Mountain's explanations by now), it makes more sense they would still be using the Ancient Chinese time intervals

2) the old time intervals do not translate well into seconds, minutes etc. They are much more and less precise. A Miao, for example, is 144 milliseconds, a Fen is 14.4 seconds, a Ke is 14 minutes 24 seconds and a Shi is about two hours.

3) it gives a much more interesting/deeper feel to the world from a narrative standpoint - in my opinion - to say, 'they hung out for a couple ke - instead of - they hung out for about a half hour

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C15
4 days ago
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Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C15
4 days ago
can you add the time units u sue? whats shun and a shi? View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C0
4 days ago
what is a neige and why do you use it? View More

WheeledWriter: Well, with the environment established i don't need to spend so much effort on describing scenes until the character moves to new ones. basic every day stuff is easier to write

Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C14
4 days ago
and what is neige? View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C13
4 days ago
You try to hard to be funny. Like the arrogant consumer face slapping part. He is trying to stay hidden, not attract attention.
With that kind of mentality, if he knows about face slapping arrogant cultivators, he should know what happens after right? endless hordes of big brothers, fathers, and grandfathers. View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C13
4 days ago
Your English is very confusing. And it is my first language. The words just don't flow as smooth as it should. View More
Treasures of Heaven and Earth · C10
4 days ago
Reading Status: C2
Impossible to read, no commas or capitalization. Author does not read his own work. So why should we?
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Reincarnation of a living god
4 days ago
Reading Status: C0
Is this harem? I want to know before I start reading. Because I see 'too many pretty women' in the description.
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Simply Trading
4 days ago

catvi: plot armor thicker than winnie the pooh honey

Divine Beast Adventures · C40
1 week ago
Try to read 3nd or 1rd. it's the same kind of pain View More

Hyowha: nope (I mean, yea something did happen, but it's fine), I was traveling through countries. The new chap is out

Store of Fates System · C40
2 weeks ago
it was very hard on my soul and psyche to read and pronounce 2th View More

Hyowha: A mistake. There are better waya to point this out tho. Thx for the contribution anyway

Store of Fates System · C40
2 weeks ago
What the **** is a 2th View More
Store of Fates System · C40
2 weeks ago

Ricegod38: Who made a novel about me

Ultimate Rice System · C1
2 weeks ago
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