DEADMAN WONDERLAND: A New Deadman

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ONGFRFR

you are playing with fire, if this flops you will get so much hate. but if this doesn't flop then you know you made a great story.

Yessir the king shall rise but real tho this better be good my guy or I am going to fell bad for you when it all crashes and starts burning.

LV 4

OP_FAN

Writing is of an amateur Story would be good but it's only ok Character development is bad Changes i would like but please don't hate me. I just want to vent out my anger and stress. Story would be good if you do the usual isekai process of meeting god giving him 1 wish and Mc says he wants to be OP The last words after getting hit by Truck-kun is bad and the people around watching tictok is stupid Summarise his life or memory of his into a short one and explain why he is in prison The rest you can handle. If you read this I'm sorry, just wanted to vent out all my suffering.

LV 4

ZYZ

Mm a deadman wonderland fanfic let's see how this goes 《.......................................................................................》

LV 4

Sanguis_Alexandra

Well I can say that the English is of decent quality It's just.. we got no description of the main character.. The stability I wouldn't know much but seems alright. Now for story development? I can say that this part is a dumpster fire.. It is being infested with votes for other stories and not part of the main work.. I didn't come to vote like a democracy I came to read. World background well.. it's Deadman Wonderland. A great idea.

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suicide_Elf

I have not read yet but I am really excited about this I am as mad as you and I will support you but can you put some romance when you can [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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HAREM_K1NG_Revived

I feel like I should make this as long as I can like up to 30-40 chapters should be good and I don't want to end this so soon so I will update like 1-3 chapters weekly and after this I think I may do a anime[img=recommend]

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WealthyBum

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AStrAl_Soul

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OP_FAN

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LV 3

Thomas_Begley

please keep going and don't give up I love this and it's great. keep the haters out and keep positive. I'm going to give five stars because it's amazing.👍♥️⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

LV 5

_oinkchan

Seems good, only 2 chaps read. ... .............. .......... ... . . . . .. . . ....

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Supe3rman1234

Trésors c'est vraiment trop bien comme nous nouvelle j'espère vraiment qu'il y aura une suite parce que je te jure c'est vraiment trop bien l'histoire est trop bien les personnages sont bien fait jusqu'ici je ne trouve rien de mal à l'entrée

LV 2

DrayToCraze

Bro the five Star squad that it is how we roll sir my good man take this kind offer of kindness and Merry Christmas my good sir and have a great new year