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The Alien's Retaliation

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Author: book_234

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The novel takes place in an alternate universe that is brimming with life. There are a lot of planets were life has greatly developed, as many civilizations were born.

Fearsome aliens and strange creatures inhabit the space, and at the same time wars and conflicts are not such a rare sight.

On a remote planet, ignorant of everything, Xeno is living a hard and monotonous life, waiting for time to make its course. However once again the mysteries of the universe will present before his eyes, changing his life completely.



If somehow you are still curious and are thinking about giving this book a chance, you should check out the review section. There you might find answered some of your questions.

The narration has been changed to third person from chapter 24. However there will still be POV changes every so often.

This is an original work and at the same time my first novel, as such constructive criticism is welcomed. English is not my first language too, feel free to point out any mistakes you may find.

WARNING: The novel will have elements of gore, violence and some pretty strong scenes.

Note: I have posted this novel on Royal Road too.
Average words per chapter --> 1400

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--> I do NOT own the cover of the novel, if the author wants me to change it he just needs to tell me to.

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book_234

Alright, this small review is needed for reader that are about to approach the book. You aren't convinced at all by the uninformative synopsis, and even at the cost of minor spoiler want to know more about it. You already now that I'm a newbie author and English is not my main language. However you shouldn't be having many problems in understanding my writing, since many others already read the book. Still beware that the first ten chapters might be tough to read. SPOILERS AHEAD(not much though) Now who exactly is Xeno, he started off as weak being obliged to work hard every day to survive. An incident suddenly happens, death is slowly approaching him. To save his life he will accept an offer from a mysterious being, changing himself completely. Received a new body, Xeno becomes another kind of existence entirely, a more powerful and dangerous one. Yet what he believed to be true strength, will demonstrate to be weakness once again. However he chose not to abandon himself, but to keep believing in his convinctions. From here only the truly evil lies ahead. The ruthlessness necessary to shape everything in his path, for himself and the ones he holds dear. I hope you know have a more clear opinion about what to expect from the book. Disclaimer: Beware 'hold dear' does not mean romance, because he won't consoder anyone in a romantic way.

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Personal review from the author. It is rather subjective as it is my own novel, but I won't make things up regarding what I would feel from the prospective of a reader. First and foremost the writing quality. It's not that good but still readable. Ifind that overall the sentences make sense and their structure is fine. There are minor mistakes here and there, therefore i cannot give four stars and since the writing isn't spectacular neither five. Then the story developement. I think It's pretty intriguing, I quite like the fights too. But there are some parts that seems rather random and not planned beforehand. Personally I really like the MC. It may be because I'm the author, but I think he is quite cool. It's a bit shameless but it's my opinion. Thus i gave 5 starts on the character. The updating stability is pretty random, but new chapters will come sooner or later. Thus I gave three stars. About the world background, I personally like the variety of scenarios presented in the novel.

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monique11211

This was right above mine in the promote you novel section so I thought I would give it a try. I did enjoy it actually and am glad I clicked it. It can now rest on the shelves of the other saved novels I like to read. Thank you!

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