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This is an Isekai styled story, written from the point of view of the protagonist.
Discover the secret of the new, unknown world with Peter, as he sets his first steps in an empty, ruined city. Meet new people from all around the globe. Fight, laugh, and cry.
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5/5 - easily one of the best works on this platform Believable characters with good development. Main character has an interesting story and the world is well developed without needless exposition. Enemies and rivals are well balanced and the main character struggles to maintain an edge without being overpowered. Chapters are released consistently and auther attempts to meet readers expectations through feedback. Would be nice to see more reader support which would lead to release of even more chapters, but then again it always would.
Man, I can't stop loving this story! I must say, It's not for everyone. This novel does have a slow start and it would be beneficial if there was editing, especially for correcting grammar mistakes. However, I love how characters behave, they almost always feel quite alive, like real people. For me, MC is the real MVP, he starts as a weak and cowardly person but with a lot of willpower who wishes to grow stronger. Now? He's quite strong, but fears himself and what he has become. I can't wait to see more of this.
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This story was slightly bettter than the standard op isekai novel on this site. The big reason were the glaws of the main character, which many people hate on, make it far more belivable and interesting. The problem comes the confrontation with Blue, a villianious human who killed an inspirational leader with poison, then was captured by the MC after much risk, and became a looming threat forcing the MC to alter his plans. All of that was fine and i could accept Blue not being killed. Even when he was recaptured by surrendering and it was obviously a scheme and not killed, but put on trial that was fine also. The reasons behind it were sound enough to make it work. The problem comes from the MC being the target of a riot by Blue to proove himself innocent, and then the MC just taking it. The reason he gives in chapter 101 about not wanting to draw negative attention for killing Blue killed the story. Blue poisoned his friend, attacked and poisoned other friends, started a riot to kill him, and stirs up trouble aganist him. I can accept characters with glaring flaws, but I can’t accept them over and over with no growth. That is why this story became unbearsble to read. All the hope and expectation as a reader that the MC would not be pushed around, was tossed in the garbage. I wrote this review since this was a decent story ruined by incredibly poor or non existent character development while otherwise being decent for this site.
for what its worth its a good idea executed poorly mainly the characters honestly its not worth the read i got to the pay wall and after 50 i was done with the novel idk bout yall but this is just me personally
I just want to start off by saying, wowza, the details in this book are ON POINT. They do an awesome job of setting up the setting and the character details. There are a few grammatical errors mostly through things like sentence structure and setnece clauses, but other than just wow. Really great details and an interesting story!
It's an interesting concept, (I wouldn't say new because I've seen it I think a few times, but with some other form of currency), and I liked how everything was formatted and introduced. Just for the people on the phones, cut the paragraphs a little bit. The biggest problem is just typos and some spelling errors (that I'm mentioning, but only because they happen frequently) and a problem that isn't really a problem and I don't know if I should take it out on Character design or Story development because I can't decide. Spelling: Thru - It's through. I mean Thru is fine, but it's informal and I mean it is a sort of journal format but that wouldn't explain the very good memory this guy has (though, to be fair, it is quite possible to remember exact conversations down to the word). I don't know why no one has mentioned it yet, or maybe someone has and I haven't seen it, but just by the fact that it hasn't changed probably means no one mentioned it. I actually went back to the first chapter to check if this was journal and I mean it does seem that way but Peter has an extremely good memory. It's just... thru is weird to read, or maybe that's just me. There's no real need to change it, but it is kind of weird? Non - It's I think... none. Because non is no in French and I'm pretty sure it was fixed at some point? Or my memory is failing me, but regardless it does happen a couple times, but not enough for it to be as brain grating as thru. Will/will - This isn't spelling, and I know it's a typo, but will is also a verb. And sometimes (and this is probably only because I'm weird) I would read this person will... and I'd think, "This person, Will." and it's be kind of hard to understand until I realize that it isn't a typo and this happens vice versa. Overall Typos: There are several typos where it really does get confusing (Probably just me) but near the beginning or middle (???) there was one (and this is super specific but there are others) where someone said: "Gey tour dog." I read that as: "Gay tour dog." And while that is probably just me being weird or something, the typos do affect the story just a little bit (mostly because I searched up gey to see if it was a word). It was "Get your dog." Probably because I was being stupid and couldn't see that, but I mean, it happened a couple times? Maybe three or four so it's not a huge problem, but it's just something I noticed. Verbs: There are verb errors, or just some verbs that are placed somewhat confusingly, although they aren't errors. Like: "Dadadaadadada," Said Mr. Fox, and left. This only happens with verbs so far, there's nothing really wrong with the adjectives and other weird things, but it's kind of iffy? I might be picky, but it's sort of just maybe it needs an article, or the verbs should be moved or something, but this kind of order happens a few times every I'd say five chapters or so. Not a real huge problem, but it's there. This last thing. I'm not even sure what category it goes into so I picked one. It's probably either character design, but it's also not character design because the characters are okay? So idk. And this is highly opinionated and only comes up when there's a lot of chapters. The plot is sort of I mean, it's clearly the tactic of not telling the reader too much, but there are some things that kind of ruined the surprise (Was it even supposed to be a surprise? idk). But like, the simplest things, it's just the order of events: 1. Introduced to Blue, by Zhong Yong and others. 2. He is described as smart. 2.5. Middle stuff happens that really isn't that essential to guessing who did it. 3. Zhong Yong goes to battle, he loses. 4. (this is important) Blue becomes supreme ruler of Martial Heroes, and the reader is told that Zhong Yong was poisoned. 5. We are told that it was possible for an inside man to have poisoned Zhong Yong, plus other possibilities which really aren't that likely. From that order... and the fact that we're literally given choices to pick from, it's kind of obvious that Blue did it. He stood the most to gain, and he was the one who decided himself as the new ruler or something (mostly him). I don't know if this was supposed to be a twist, or if it wasn't, but just from the fact that Zhong Yong died, it kind of lays suspicion that there was an inside man. The only other men that were introduced don't even seem to be as close to Zhong Yong as Blue did and while I mean, yes some external force could come; the likelihood. I don't know if it's just me being weird, or if this wasn't even supposed to be a plot twist, but if it was, I would make it so that Blue becoming supreme ruler of Martial Heroes was more smooth. It wasn't smooth, I mean I guess it sort of was? But also, it wasn't. It was random and a choice that, to me at least, was strange because while Blue is a fantastic smart person, he's not physically strong and wouldn't someone test him??? Also, he's in the perfect situation where getting money and becoming stronger would benefit him as others said he was smart, but not muscle-y strong. If this was supposed to be a plot twist (idk if it is) the order of events should be fixed maybe? Just maybe... So that maybe... idk, these people learn of the poison first before they confront Zhong Yong. Whether or not Zhong Yong agrees doesn't matter and regardless Blue is informed and while he doesn't go completely against it, he isn't completely for it. He has to be someone who is also caught in the moment of "HE'S GOING TO BE POISONED??". From there it can continue, with extra security and probably make some sort of super weak alibi that the readers can't figure out (to solve that, make the fake alibi and the truth so spread out, in terms of chapters) and usually, unless people pull some sort of weird trick, it should work? I'm not sure...? I'm not even sure if this was supposed to be a plot twist, it just disturbed me how everyone is this super logical group that also somehow fails to notice the fact that Blue has the most to gain and has the highest chance of getting Zhong Yong. The other thing was that everyone is somewhat this sort of perfect logician and while this is fine and makes sense, they all had these moments of brilliance but people aren't just smart or logical. And I mean, Nacho Hat with Extra Avocado (I miss the guy, he was funny) wasn't super smart, but still. All the 'good' characters and the really 'bad' characters are all smart, capable people who can do things, and I mean it's fine, but also... it's weird? To me at least. They're just... too perfect. Too perfect in the way how their flaws somehow make them seem cooler. Idk, maybe I just don't know them well enough, but that's sort of the feeling they gave me. It could be with who is summoned and whatnot, but I mean eh. There was something I was going to point out, but I think... I just forgot it. Sorry Q.Q If I do remember it, I'll add it in, but right now I think... O.o Other than most of that sort of too opinionated thing, it's really cool and I liked the fact that Will just pops in whenever I was going "Where's Will?". I mean out of everything that was great, Will going in and out was the best. He's just... there. Like some creep, but he's just... THERE...
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Amazing story! The writing is absolutely on spot and so compelling. I had a hard time stopping reading this. You managed to write a isekai story in a absolutely not cliché way and it's really interesting. Peter himself is interesting. Not perfect, not bad, not the most powerful or clever around. Just a normal guy in shitty circumstances. I usually don't read story like this on webnovel but your story charmed me and I'm totally hooked. Thanks for writing this :)
This novel is written like a teenagers diary. Day 1- I saw my crush. Day 2- we made eye contact. Day 3- I waved to her. The MC is also pathetic. I’ve read comments where people are enjoying his flaws. I guess if you like that type of story where MC struggles through the journey being oblivious this is for you. I get a LOST tv series vibe from it. I’m imagining being stuck on an island with other random people transmigrated over. A magic rock in the center that resembles a system giving out food/buffs/shelter for points earned on the island.
Story is alright and keeps you engaged. Weak to strong mc. Writing quality is not that good. Manageable if you are use to correcting in your head. I read up to chapter 100. gonna drop as I just don’t like the way it’s going. Like we see mc grinding so much. Only for the bad guys to be on his level. Mc grinds nonstop and some how every bad guy is near his level. That is personally what I didn’t like. So will be dropping.
I’ve read up to chapter 718 so this will be an honest review of an avid reader of this novel So I’ll give a review that can reflect my thoughts on the novel. I guess i’ll hop into the different stared catagories and then i’ll add a little bit of a personal opinion on the bottom Writing Quality: This part is actually pretty good, the only thing that really hurts this category is a misspelling here and there the thought is clearly conveyed so it’s not hard to figure out. Zero issues in understanding what’s going on in the story though so it’s not to impactful. Updating Stability: I’ve been reading this novel for a while and the author MasterHexer went on a break a couple months ago but came back with a 2 chapters a day. Story Development: I probably have the most to say about this because the story development is so well done. In the beginning you may be a little bit confused because MasterHexer just jumps right into it, but it’s been such a smooth read for me and has always left me craving for more. Perfect in my opinion. Character Design: I don’t really know how to start this but to keep it simple the characters are solidly made and the story shows growth in them as characters of the story. Perfect in my opinion World Background: The background of the novel is solid as well. The way the the author writes the novel gives easy imagery into what kind of place the story is taking place in. Not sure what else i should add to this but again, perfect in my opinion. So a little personal shpeal here, I really enjoy this novel and decided to try and give this story justice with a well created review from a readers POV. The author, MasterHexer, wrote this story in a very unique way and I think it’s fair to say that he nailed it and with his take on isekai this is not a novel in which you can find similar stories out there (trust me I’ve tried). I urge you to check this novel out if your looking for a good story. I appreciate those who read this and if your still on the fence, trust me on this when I say you’ll like this story.
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This novel is lit! This is the kind that I need to learn from. Kudos to the author as the story paved well. A smooth sailing ship in the sea without a bumpy ride. No grammar mistakes and round characters. Definitely a good read for me!
Easily one if the truest hidden gems on WebNovel, the writing quality is easily amongst the best on this site with typos being very rare. The pacing is just right, being fast where it needs to and slow whenever there's a lot more for the reader to pick up on. The story development is incredible and really establishes a standout novel amongst the tidal wave of isekai novels on this site. The character design is perfect and each and every character is unique in their own ways. This novel used to have very regular updates however the author has just come back from a very long break and although the updates now appear to be regular it's impossible to make a judgement for the foreseeable future, however the 2/day chapters has been kept regular for the past few weeks. The world background is amazing too, with the whole novel taking place from the perspective of one character as he explores his new environment and its changes, we are still learning more about the world of 'Another Stupid Isekai' as the story progresses and I am very looking forward to how it will. Overall, I'm giving this novel a 4.6/5, 5 stars in all categories except in updating stability, however I will update tgis in the future.
someone please tell if this masterpiece is just on hiatus and isn't dropped. seriously this is one of the best novels i've read up to date. I'm too invested in it now. author-san pls give us ou fix.
5/5 To be honest i have already made a reveiw but this is one of the best stories i have ever read. i think your decison to make it kind of diary ish is perfect and complemented your decison to not use ‘I’ perfect. all in all i love your book and i hope you keep writing
Simply amazing. Everything from individual characters to the plot as a whole seems so natural that it feels like you are part of it all. I also personally love they way the story is like a diary going through pretty much a day to day view from the mc's perspective, because it never seems like you get any useless information soved down your throat. A great read, recommended for sure.
5/5 i love this story and how it was written. One of the things i love the most about the story is the unique take you make by making it first person instead of third. Because of your decison it move it to first person instead of third it really changes everything about the novel and mkes you close to the chachter becaue he is the only person you know the thoughts of. Another idea in your story i loved was how you make it like the charchter is writing the book itself saying things like ‘judgement day we would later celbreate’. things like this really make you connect to the charchters and this is what i love about your story
This one just clicks for me so i might just be a little biased but its definitely one of the BEST novels i have ever read . Characters and story development are amazing . Author hasnt expanded the world that much as of now (only read free chapters)but there is definitely something interesting in there and i cant wait to fibd out more about it. Spelling at some times can be a tad iffy and not make sense but it doesnt really ruin anything. idk about updates tho . still put a 5 star. Just read it .
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