Reborn in DxD with a Nasuverse system

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Azureskyblue

Shameless author review this novel is about a dude who gets reincarnated and tries to become the strongest in the universe with the power of a nausverse system it starts off kinda slow

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ARandomDream

I'm bored and so I'm here to review since I have read this. Writing Quality: 3 Stars, needs some improvement and the use of " " in sentences, as well as proper use of words to indicate 3rd person such as 'Adam looked around his surroundings, and felt danger emanatting from a bush. He tightened the grip on his sword and started to approach it, slowly.' etc.. Story Development: 4 Stars for now as this is only the beginning and most things looks good. Character Design: 2 Stars, why? If you're going on cannon characters, then you've kinda f7cked most things up, Azazel isn't like that as well as Pnemue or whatevs. The mc? (real reason this is 2 stars)I feel like he's going to turn into a beta and harem collecting one.. call it an insticnt of a degenerate who roamed the barren lands called WebNovel. Updt Stability: 5 Stars as you've only started this ff. World Background: 3 Stars (might be 4 later on), Author, you know you could have a lil backstory of him in the grigori and such as well as wondering around since he has Solomon... This is my honest review as I don't have much to do right now. Author no pressure.

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Isana_Yashiro

Thank You For Your Making This Novel Because Many Nasuverse Novels Always Dropped By Their Author And Plss Don't Dropped The Novel And Thanks

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Kami12

Great story and I thank the author for writing it but the characters’ actions seem forced at times also seem like you are rushing through things like some authors spend at least two chapter build up relationships. if any of that made sense😅😅😅😅😅😅

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Vora

like the story but some grammar issue beside that the story really good