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An Ordinary Traveler Who Meets Every One Extraordinary
4.51 (15 ratings)
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Wil is just your everyday ordinary person who just happens to live in a fantasy world. 2 days after his 15th birthday he and his pal, a teen flight lion begin their journey to find Mera's moving gardens and on this journey, he will befriend a traveling merchant, ghosts, dragons,beast-men, royalty and many more.
let's dive into the extraordinary life of Wil as he travels the world solving its various mystery's
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There are a few unexpected turns i have a gut feeling that the wil is not as ordinary as he looks poor wil i hope he wont feel inferior to the people around him looking forward to the next chapter
the story starts off as a little slow but picks up speed around the 3rd to 4th chapter this story has a lot of different characters, its not too wordy but its good.
The story was good, It's getting better and better in each chapter. About the grammar, I can't talk much. Because my grammar not good also. Just don't give up on your writing. Grammar isn't the main problem, if your story is good then people will support you.
First of all, I like the concept of dais and lils. I think the story has a great future ahead. But just like what the other reviewers said, grammar and vocabulary needs to be improved. A LOT. Especially for the first chapter since first chapter is where you can get readers from being interested with your book.
Ohhh i feel the anime adventure vibe on this one it's a good one. And it makes my imagination wonder[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]
YES ITS THE AUTHOR I am going to give my self some appreciation for the hard work I did writing this novel despite having a mountain of work graciously given to me by school
i don't see a love interest for the William but their are all kinds of ships, straight, gay, polygamy so its hard to guess who the love interest is well hope to see them soon
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The story is interesting and it get better and better the more you read it. I'm still at chapter 5 but I'm now interested in your novel. the only problem is the grammar but it's readable than some trash translations that I read so good job. just use Grammarly if you are having trouble in grammar.
The story is just beginning, but it's a good start. I am waiting for William's further bloody adventures and hope that chapters will be a bit more longer. Fighting! ʕง•ᴥ•ʔง
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Yosh! First thing first! I read your first chapter and I couldn't grasp anything. (Yes I'm pea brain!!) Ahem I mean... Your paragraph is too long. I got lost. Another thing is your punctuations. Do not hate me! I bare no ill!!! Your story is GREAT!!! I LIKE IT!! REALLY And... and Your chapter title is direct. Please keep it up I will be looking forward to your highlight. I'm the same as you.
Alright so I have a couple of things for this review. - The grammer is what needs to be worked upon, but i think it can be fixed If you just read it out loud for yourself before publishing the chap. - The story i see where is going but sometimes you are trying to tell something and i need to read it again to make sure i get what youre trying to Write. Overall I think it’s worth a shot but rework the chapters and it’ll become very good🥳
This book has so much potential. I love that it is fantasy and adventure and I can sense action and how it would relate to teenagers. The only tip to the author would be grammar and vocabulary to make it more clear and make readers envision the world around them
The story has an interesting plot, and while some parts are quite fast-paced, the author still tries to delve deep into the history of the world and other exposition for the readers. The writing is a bit shaky at the start, but slowly gets better over time. Not gonna leave any spoilers, but this story definitely has quite a few twists and turns later on.