Webnovel Author: MagneBP666 - Novel Collection

MagneBP666

1yr

Posted

Definitely a good read, the descriptions are on point and never gets boring to read. The story isn't dull at all and quite intriguing! Good job!

My boyfriend can control the darkness

Fantasy · funkiller_562

MagneBP666

1yr

Commented

Wow, the chapter is so well described and it never really gets boring! I'll definitely keep reading

ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Violet eyes

My boyfriend can control the darkness

Fantasy · funkiller_562

MagneBP666

3yr

Replied to NightWind

Ability orbs cost money ^^

What she said was true, and I should probably have thought more about the possible danger, but this dream was one I had had for many years now, I would get an ability and work till I reach my limit, then join the army and save the world. Sister Maria had always told me that the ability I would get would be inferior to most others since we were so low in the hierarchy. But I still believed that if you worked hard enough, then anything is achievable.

THE GODSENT

Fantasy · MagneBP666

MagneBP666

3yr

Posted

The book is intriguing and immersive from the start! It gives off a good vibe and you could easily spend the entire day reading it. I would say that if you like the tags, you should really read it!

NOTHING EXIST

Fantasy · Kimchi231

MagneBP666

3yr

Posted

Writing could use some check... but other than that, the story has a good flow and interesting plot! At last I would suggest you reading it if you like the tags :)

The Doting CEO Alpha and his Wife

Fantasy · xAlexiax

MagneBP666

3yr

Posted

I'm confused as to the writing... It has mistakes here and there but nothing that makes it unreadable or the sorts, but despite that, the author still describes and immerses the reader successfully!

Tale of MAKKON

History · Aby_jsbbs56

MagneBP666

3yr

Commented

+1 for banan AHAHA!

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Fantasy · _banana_

MagneBP666

3yr

Posted

Okay... so the only reason it's not a 5-star review is because the chaps are so short, I am unaware about whether the newer chapters are longer or the same but 500 words per chap are just too short for me. WITH THAT BEING SAID! This novel is wonderful quality! The Author does a great job at describing, and it's easy to follow what is happening! You should read if you like the tags!

The Demon Lords Unknown Mate

Fantasy · Armanda_Hax

MagneBP666

3yr

Posted

The quality of the writing is very good, and there are no grammatical flaws that annoys you when you read. The only thing that could be done better is the stability of updates. I know the chapters are long but maybe cut them down and update more ^^

Divine Demon God

Fantasy · Hunter101Bomber

MagneBP666

3yr

Posted

The author's own style of writing is fantastic and really immersive! It is a bit fast-paced at the start but I find that really well working as you quickly get introduced to the new world! Totally a must read

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Fantasy · FeralNeko

MagneBP666

3yr

Commented

I see the reference here

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Crowning Cruel Crow

Fantasy · TacoKun

MagneBP666

3yr

Posted

Hello fellow readers:) I just wanted to review this because it's sad there is only 1 review. So the story is good and full of fantasy, but the grammar is lacking. I know the author are working very hard on fixing grammar and making new chapters, so I believe it deserves more attention.

GDXS: Laws of Menace

Fantasy · DjxCarma

MagneBP666

3yr

Replied to Qbic

I hope you guys appreciate it, I spend ridicously long time on them😩😊

ch 0 7 Demon Jaegers

Demon Jaeger

Fantasy · MagneBP666

MagneBP666

3yr

Replied to Anton_Esbensen

Thank you very much! I hope to see you around as we progress further in the story. ^^

Demon Jaeger

Fantasy · MagneBP666

MagneBP666

3yr

Replied to Anden_manden

Thank you very much! It is chapters like these that motivates me ^^

Demon Jaeger

Fantasy · MagneBP666

MagneBP666

3yr

Replied to AJZHEN

I could feel my legs starting to give up, after all, I did have a parasite gnash through my brain for the last 5 hours, I felt weak, my whole body was sore after breaking and tearing it apart and healing itself over and over again. But I had noticed something, ever since the beginning, my body had begun to heal faster the more injuries that had come... Right now I could heal a new finger in about 10-15 days... but it came with a high price, at least for me that was, this ever consuming hunger was far from practical in my state, my stomach felt like it had a hole in it, and it would corrupt everything inside me if not fed.