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The Daily Life of a Disciple
4.84 (14 ratings)
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A short story about the rambles of the youngest disciple from Red Hill sect. In this disciple's life, there are two people who he considers his closest family; his shizun and his senior brother Jin. One of them who holds a dangerous secret.
"With time, even a mountain can turn into river. And even if the river runs to the sea, the waters are destined to never meet. Such things, shixiong, are what we call fate."
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I'm surprise that this is actually a short story. At first, I thought that the author is not updating that's why it only has seven chapters. It's good. Really ☺️ But why does it seem open-ended?? 🤔 Or I'm just mistaken? 'Cuz I don't quite get the ending.
Descriptive prose and wonderful imagery bring this world to life. This may be short, but it's an excellent example of how big things come in little packages. It was a great read, and I hope the author continues writing and will gift us with future stories.
This story is amazing. I love it and enjoy it very much. I like chinese theme novel a lot too. I like how you describe the characters and the interactions between them are very fun to read. Still don't know what is the main conflict is but I can't wait for them. Good job! Waiting for the next chapters
I like the cover! I need more chapters too! I like it so far even though it's only three chapters. The writing flows nicely and is very poetic. I like the choice of words. Everything is channeled so well that we can really understand. The narrative is very good written. This book has a pretty good potential. I Automatically add this book in my library! Good job author! Keep it up!
I will do another review later since this story is still new.🎉 I really like the flow of the story so far. Honestly this is the first, first person novel i have read on this app, maybe even in a couple years actually. Your doing it perfectly. First chapter is definitely a grabber. Keep Going 🥳
Oh writer , I am mesmerized by the plot. The characters are so intriguing but it is a pity just a few chapters are here. I hope tou would update more. You have already got the knack of writing. The background,synopsis and cover are too good to explain. More power to you. Keep updating.
Few chapter but thd story is promising and it has a nice flow to it. Good job author for writing it in such a beautiful way. One can see your efforts throgh the story.
First off, great cover hehe! :D Okay, this is a great book, and I'd love to see more of it! The writing itself is great and poetic. I love the way the author describes stuff, and I love how smooth the story felt hehe! :D Grammar and punctuation wise, perfect! :D Also, honestly, I almost never read cultivation novel and stuff, but I found the concept interesting hehe! I can see that the author had put a lot of thought and research into this! Great job, author! :D
The most well written story I've reviewed so far! Well done. The story has good progression and build up. You can tell the author has done their history research, which has helped the authenticity greatly I think. I enjoyed it and hope to see more in the future.
First when I see the book cover I got excited because it remind me of Mo Dao Zu Shi, one of my favorite anime and novel of all time. And when I read the chapters, surely it didn't disappoint me. The MCs interactions is really nicee and reminds me a lot of Lang Wangji and Jiang Cheng 😍💕. I will definitely add this to my collections and look forward for its updates 😉. Great work author!
I think what you're doing is work of litterature, the story has good set up to start and the following chapters promise to be really interesting. Keep going author [img=recommend]
I’ll say it great, but the daily updates are lacking and some part of the story grammar get confusing at times but overall it decent! .
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Wow first review! This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this novel will fare well in the future. Kudos and congrats!