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Caroline

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Author: Kiyah

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After getting engaged to a man she's never met. Caroline moves to the Van Estate, where she realizes that her husband to be, is not who he seems.

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"Caroline!"

The voice of her pursuer calls out to her, as she turns down the darkly lit corridor, hoping to elude them. But the footsteps only get closer, and closer. She runs down the end of the corridor, to a crossroad.

"Right or left?"

The footsteps get closer.

"Was the exit right or left?!"

She thinks to herself, as the voice once again calls out to her.

"Caroline! Come out, come out, wherever you are!"

"Right!"

She turns down the right corridor and runs as fast as she's able. As she gets closer, a bright light shines through. Causing her to almost leap with joy, she had chosen the right way! Or at least that's what she had thought. As she gets closer she realizes that this is in fact a dead end. The light was coming from a window; taking up the majority of the wall. She turns to go back, but she's met with a familiar pair of vibrant, purple eyes, staring back at her from the end of the hallway. She freezes in fear, as the figure grins, and calmly walks towards her.

"Found you."

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    Ndidi_Otuya

    i must say, i am actually hooked. great character building, you all but blow me away with the way you put your words together, and so, nice job, great work!

    3yr
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    Lal_CrocusMist

    Intriguing! I like how you playfully wrote the chapters giving an insight into the beautiful romance to watch out for. but isn't too early for you to paywall the chapters? Well, the author knows what she's doing so I trust what surprises you have for us! Wish you all the best!

    3yr
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    Zenchii_912_

    Ahhhh it's good. Though I couldn't open the next chapter I can tell that it will definitely make a good history fiction story. I'll surely add this to my library[img=recommend]

    3yr
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    Afolabi_Mubarak

    Another book from this brilliant author. I'm not surprised at how amazing it is. Keep it up. I'm definitely adding this to my library. Keep updating.

    3yr
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    Craig_Watson

    This book really takes it's time to walk you through Caroline's experience of arrival. I takes some patience to read. But if you love fully detailed books, then this is for you.

    3yr
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    TheDragon1231

    Fascinating! This is a novel with great potential. The plot caught my attention and it kept me glued to the chair while I enjoyed reading. Keep it up, Author

    3yr
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    Jacket_Josh

    Very interesting setup for the story! I wasn't expecting a mysterious beginning for a romance noel, but it's a welcome difference! Th author's descriptions are real, and grounded to make them feel a lot more down to Earth, and the use of words really helps the main character and the characters around them feel a lot more natural than some other novels. Really liked what I've read so far!

    3yr
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    Shianne_De_Kock

    I love your writing style! The diction and flow of words is perfect. Caroline started off so freaky, even I was scared. The story is very interesting and I would definitely recommend it to anyone who loves those vibrant purple eyes (wink wink)😂 Well written, congratulations [img=recommend]

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    PeNNWilaZ_PlayZ

    This is brilliance captured in words by a very talented author. I love everything about this book. From it's characters to it's plot and from it's world to its cover page. Everything in this story fits like a jigsaw puzzle with all the right piece. Thumbs up to the author for taking time to consider her readers and giving them what they deserve. A masterpiece holds you till it end. So please do take time thinking about whether to read it for that time might be best spent enjoying it.

    3yr
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    Miss_Eryl

    I like the style of your writing the plot, the scenes and the prologue says it more to read more. So enjoyable to read. Keep ok writing., 😊😊 love the title too.

    3yr
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    shabnam_jeddikar

    Another great work from this talented Author! The synopsis is really engaging and I loved the mysterious side of it, the plot is great and it's really enjoyable to read!I totally recommend it! keep up with the good work Author!🖒

    3yr
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    feejae

    I love how the prologue started and the plot twist at the end of it! Found myself being engrossed in the story until I realised I was done with the five chapters 😭 Looking forward to your next update, cause I need to know what’ll happen to my homegirl Caroline

    3yr
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    Oracle17

    Wow, captivating from the very first chapter. I've always loved historical novels. This one is just oozing with mystery and suspense. I love your writing style and your grammar is top-notch. Keep up the good work!🌹❤

    3yr
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    dreamcatcher_346

    I was captivated by the prologue. It is a very excellent style of writing and a very good pacing. I really like reading the prologue as we were open to the character's small attitude and the likes.[img=recommend]

    3yr
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    Stoptakingusername

    I really enjoy the style, it has a very Victorian feel to it and it’s really well done. I also like how right away we know, this just isn’t right. If I had to guess I’d say the dad owes the Count and the daughter is payment.

    3yr
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    Joondabest_

    The novel was very much entertaining and amusing to read. The author's view about things was very clear, Hoping to see more of your work! keep it up!

    3yr
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    drimar44

    Another beautiful story from this author, though this one has more a spine tingling chill about it, but never the less it is simply beautiful I admire this authors work very much

    3yr
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    KiyahLW

    Hello, I'm the author. I gave myself a rating, so I could leave a comment; since this is published directly through Webnovel. I hope you all enjoy my work, and thank you for reading!

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    3yr
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    Alisa_Leslie269

    A truly gripping and entertaining read! Grabs your attention and doesn't let go.Im excited to see the events unfold and the characters develop ❤️

    3yr
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