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I will be honest, there are few edits and finishing touches that has to be done. You have potential and I know you will still grow along the way. Read more about metaphoric and poetic narrations and you will get some insight about them. Study about sentence flow and sentence sequence. There are many guides on internet. All in all, a very promising work! I gotta say I'm inpressed! With talented author, this novel was in good hands!
This book is gonna be a lit. The work speaks of efforts of author. It is a worth reading book. The synopsis and plot are [img=recommend]. I love the pacing and world characters writer built up.[img=update][img=recommend]
Nice. This is amazing I really enjoyed it. The writing quality and character design were really impressive and would gladly read it over and over.
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This is truly a great book , i love the way it's written and the story is so fascinating , you are really talented and there is so much more you can and will achieve . Keep it up.
Love the title I guess this book is going to be amazing please start typing this book asap can't wait to read the up coming chapters ........
nice story with intriguing synopsis. i especially like the interaction between the characters in the novel.😍😍😍it's funny and i love both of the characters already.
I love how it was overall based on a history that actually took place, I enjoyed your way of writing, the suspension, the sugar coat on some of the actions and most importantly the story development make you want to not stop reading at all! 💜
The author needs to watch out for grammatical errors because there are a number of such errors throughout the story. I personally stumbled over the different characters and mixed them up with each other, but the story plot seems sound so far otherwise, and being based on historical facts, the setting of the story seems pretty good as well. Highly suggested for historical fiction fans!
Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
The fascinating first premise, the way the story goes from its plot progression is superb, I highly recommend this book and best of luck to you Author! Kudos to you!
The history of another country is always truly interesting, showing the mistakes of the past. Humans are human no matter where they are. The story mixes in nicely, forming the plot. Keep on writing!
It needs some work, but I'm sure you've been told, so I'm not going to get into it. It is really good though, (In my opinion) and I'm sure you'll do great . Keep working.
The world in chaos- interesting plot. The names are really unique and sounds legendary at the same time. Thank you author for this story. Just don't forget that we can use dialogues to describe the setting too.
Keep at it. :) Really got me in awe for the up coming chapters[img=recommend] Story seems to coming well I like how you introduced the plot in the first chapter and proceeded towards the main character. Looking forward to the next one
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This story has an interesting start. I found the names and title unique which is a great plus since this adds to my addition words. Now for review proper, Writing quality: well there are some g-errors but it didn't much hinder you from reading. Stability of Updates. Well I know for a story to liven up, you need every time to write each chapter. So just take your time. Though I look forward to see this one grow more chaps. Story Development: The opening was great. A conflict among those who is on power already set the mood for the story. The war of warlords seems interesting too. Character Design: The characters were detailed and absolutely alive. I find the princess personality likable too. The dialogues between characters are smooth too. World Background. Greatly written. Overall this book is a great read already and addition to my collections. I look forward for more updates. Keep it up Author!
Great plot tbf, really digging it so far. My only Ebi's for the author are to go back and proof read a little before posting. There are a couple mistakes here and there grammatically, but the author shows great potential! Keep it up. This is deffo soon to blow.
I really want to see how "the era of warlords" unfolds. It paves the way for a really wonderful world. The first two chapters are organized and well written. Keep up the good work.
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This book has a really smooth opening. Only two chapters posted so far but the quality was very good. Love the idea of a world in chaos and varies factions fighting for control. Certainly a good setting for an epic novel. The characters so far seem colorful and well-written, which will certainly help this story going forward. I like what I'm seeing. I'm sure the high quality will continue.
Wowww fr im amazed biruh...y did u keep this fascinating talent of urs inside all this years we have known eachother?? But fr broo keep it up we love uuu👏🏾😗❤
Yeahhhh... i know i am reviewing my own freakin book:) anyways what i want to say is... if you really like this book, if you REALLY like it then please add it to you library. Anyways thanks for checking it out:)